Marching Alone. Poem by Nabakishore Dash

Marching Alone.

Rating: 5.0


World is a staircase,
some ascend,
some descend
while some may halt
in different steps.
Going up is difficult
for those who are lazy,
made easy for those
with resoluteness
and honesty.
Even then vale of tears,
problems are sure to appear
but solutions must be there.
If no solution, may be it is not
a problem and is a truth
to be accepted.
None may help,
one should not yelp,
may have to march alone
to overcome the gloomy days
and reach the target
on his/her own.
In such a situation
one must tread valiantly,
vividly recollecting that
you are always alone
in tomb, trouble,
throne and top position.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
One should not be afraid of proceeding alone in the journey of life.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 20 November 2021

An excellent poem dear Nabakishore! I like what you expressed at the end, 'you are always alone in tomb, trouble, throne and top position'...5 stars and to my favorite.

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Nabakishore Dash. 20 November 2021

Heart felt gratitude for you have read it so promptly and also for appreciating.Are u still in Kiit university?

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 21 November 2021

A wonderful poem with great insight. Brilliant lines to ponder about to lead a good life. Top Marks! !

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Nabakishore Dash 22 November 2021

Thank you Madam for your words of appreciation and inspiration.With regards and best wishes to you.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 August 2022

LAST ONE: ADDITION: To My Favourites this amazing read

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 August 2022

THREE: Summing up your fantastic words in this magnificently written poem: 'Alive remembering that you are always alone in the grave, trouble, throne and top position'. A poem to my heart, Dr. Dash.5 Stars Top Score and myriad more!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 August 2022

TWO: like I have with my own genius bro, sans knowing he constantly go forward and have found some brand-new subjects, the ratio of a genius is limitless and sans knowing he has found some new objects/subjects again, but also a great problem to communicate with his fellow ordinary persons.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 August 2022

ONE: Dr. Dash, I cite your concludiing lines: you are always alone in tomb, trouble, throne and top position, So very true and some individuals can only go forward or up the society staircase,

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Aarzoo Mehek 26 November 2021

Brilliantly penned the realities of life. At the end we all are alone with our deeds.

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