Mask Poem by Min Sia

Mask

Rating: 4.7


To my friend, Naru Kaede



A mask
Whatever it proclaims
Hides the very existence
But beyond the dying essence
Jailed beauty remains
Face's locked purity within
Suffocated by elemental chemicals
of the servants of the material world
Beholds the real lies
of the maternal world has endowed

Without a mask
An angel in disguise
A mysterious fairy of the old virgin valley
of the first nature's bloom.
Behind those eyes, a lady's spell
Waiting to be unleashed...
Waiting to be unveiled...
Your untouched face
The world's dying for a handful glance
To feel the realm of Naivette's gift

And here you are
Upon the fountain of spirits
Lovely face reflecting thee
My dearest friend of charm
Not be afraid of your journey
Don't revolve on the world,
Instead, let the world revolves on you
Don't play with their game
Instead, let them play with your game
My young lady of sweetest serenity...

My dearest friend Naru Kaede...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mine Yours 12 December 2008

a heartfelt and sensitive dedication to your friend lucky them, whoever they are

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Mine Yours 12 December 2008

a heartfelt and sensitive dedication to your friend lucky them, whoever they are

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Sathyanarayana M V S 12 December 2008

How beautiful must be your great friend? ? ? ! ! ! ! I reallly wonder.......very good poem Min. I enjoyed reading it.

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 12 December 2008

Though all wear masks There is my one friend The God send Who is without a mask of conciet and deciet No wonder i love her most. Good work and Good poem

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Gargi Saha 12 December 2008

A wonderful poem. u get 10+++++++................

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The mistery of the mask hightens and tightens as we patiently wait for the unvailing and were ot diassapointed. Well written.

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don't we ll hide behind a mask at some point in our lives, whether it be for good or bad, shame or anger, beautifully expressed, your a great poet :)

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Hazem Al Jaber 16 December 2008

yes, , that`s so true.. A mask Whatever it proclaims Hides the very existence you are a great poet knows how to pen your feelings.. wish you all my best dear sweet poet.. hazem al..

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 13 December 2008

But beyond the dying essence Jailed beauty remains these lines attracted me. a good write up. you have taken some efforts to make this well worded poem. today i posted some. pl read

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 12 December 2008

lovely poem ' to a lovely friend-thanksfor sharing

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