Masturbating Desires Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

Masturbating Desires

Rating: 5.0


I can't stay away from you!
Even though you cheated...
Repeatedly on me
Then pleaded each time,
To find yourself back into my arms!
As if they do not ache from the thoughts
Of you shaking your ass like bait!
Foreshaking any doubts...
Discourage I prowl and sniff you out!

Whatever sweetness that you have...
I want that sweetness bad I am raging,
With passion like a bull!
It drives me mad with jealousy.
Inviting fantasies of you out there hunting...
Anyone
Willing to buy my sugar!

As I can't stay away from you,
Or the view of you seductively receiving
Me!
Masturbating desires in your mind!
I wish you'd give up that time for us,
Sometimes.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 25 August 2023

Line 9 I think should read 'discouraged' (with 2 d's) . A few other minor problems, but I give 5 stars ***** and plan to put in my Sept. Showcase. : ) bri thanks

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Bri Edwards 25 August 2023

LINE 8: I'm sure you mean FORSAKING, not 'FORSHAKING'. : ) I doubt you use 'masturbating' in its LITERAL sense of sexual stimulation of male or female human ' organs'.

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