[INSPIRED BY INDIRA BABBELLAPATI''S
IN GRATITUDE TO MY DESTINY]
may be there is a destiny
may be it can bring you
down from the sky to the
shamble.....
even in that shamble
you can find yourself TRUE
ho wonderful. suggestion 'may be' = 'maybe' maybe is one word in this context. shan
Your use of the word 'shamble' in this poem is both unusual and refreshingly poetic. Your theme is timeless. Your expression free from clutter and true as steel. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
Every living things is destine to life and death and the between the two, I believe, one can control his/her destiny or life purpose. Another poem of wisdom and a 10. I read the other two you suggested.
All is not lost if we are true to ourselves. Excellent. Kind wishes, Sandra
May be........ Simple but beautifully expressed. Enjoyed.
We are destined. Accepting the destiny is the greatest strength.You are a specialist in short poems.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
the truest of all truths