# # May Be.... Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

# # May Be....

Rating: 3.6


[INSPIRED BY INDIRA BABBELLAPATI''S
IN GRATITUDE TO MY DESTINY]

may be there is a destiny
may be it can bring you
down from the sky to the
shamble.....
even in that shamble
you can find yourself TRUE

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nalini Hebbar 30 October 2009

the truest of all truths

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 29 October 2009

ho wonderful. suggestion 'may be' = 'maybe' maybe is one word in this context. shan

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Alison Cassidy 28 October 2009

Your use of the word 'shamble' in this poem is both unusual and refreshingly poetic. Your theme is timeless. Your expression free from clutter and true as steel. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 28 October 2009

Every living things is destine to life and death and the between the two, I believe, one can control his/her destiny or life purpose. Another poem of wisdom and a 10. I read the other two you suggested.

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Joseph Poewhit 28 October 2009

Surroundings are really only props of the stage of life.

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Sandhya S N 06 November 2009

beautiful regards sandhya

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Joseph Poewhit 02 November 2009

Humility can be mind awaking

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Sandra Fowler 02 November 2009

All is not lost if we are true to ourselves. Excellent. Kind wishes, Sandra

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Ravi Sathasivam 01 November 2009

May be........ Simple but beautifully expressed. Enjoyed.

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Swatimalya Chattopadhyay 30 October 2009

We are destined. Accepting the destiny is the greatest strength.You are a specialist in short poems.

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