Unconquerable
I, wonder-thought, will remain
When time die away
Wah poetic food for thot, gud senryu poem! Pls coment my latest poem.
A nice poetic imagination, Salema. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks
A lovely poem devoted to one's quality of self-confidence which makes him or her unconquerable. Thanks. Loved reading it.
Salema, after reading this poem, you've got my attention. I will attempt to learn this style. Thank you for your profound poem, and for teaching me something new.
Interesting. You have taught me the difference between senryu and haiku. My haiku are senryu, and so are almost all Western haiku-fakes.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
thought, will remain When time die away Very true. Thoughtful of thoughts.