Memories Poem by Salema Khatun

Memories

Rating: 4.8


The sweet breeze of your words hit
the wall of my heart, some are soft
and some are hard , soft are those still
I remember, hard ones are sent to
fetch some soothing water your velvety
smell with that of the angel works like
a balm on the wounds of the moment
throwing sadness to the salty ocean ,
the freshness of your departure burns
me like a missile, I hiccupped with
the drink of your guerrilla smile, the
parody presence of you in the memory
of mine is a massacre of my mediocre
sense, so I faint and go deep to the
unconsciousness to crash the beauty
of my life in the put out light I explode
darkness to crumble all the weapons
of amazing love violence, I rise again
to my senses to water and to embrace
the iron tree of your remembrance.

Sunday, September 23, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: senses,soothing,wounds
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 09 January 2017

Your words. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Khairul Ahsan 16 July 2013

the freshness of your departure burns me like a missile, I hiccupped with the drink of your guerrilla smile, Liked this very much. A great poem to read but please put the punctuation in place!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 09 January 2017

Enjoyed reading your poem, Salema++++++++++ congrats on poem of the day++++++++

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Richard Wlodarski 09 January 2017

Salema, my first exposure to your poetry, and to a love poem written in this style. Both have won over a fan. Congratulations on Poem Of The Day.

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 05 December 2012

very well written... beautiful love poem....

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Rajnish Manga 09 January 2017

An exquisite portrayal of emotions relating to a life blessed with love recalled in a flash-back. Congrats and Thanks for sharing the poem, Salema Khatun. the freshness of your departure burns me like a missile /...guerrilla smile iron tree of your remembrance.

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Chinedu Dike 09 January 2017

A well articulated piece of poetry, elegantly brought forth in beautiful diction with conviction. Thanks for sharing.

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Sylvaonyema Uba 09 January 2017

Nice articulation and blend of words and phrases. Good poem. Sylva-Onyema Uba

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 09 January 2017

Beauty of love is, its positive side paves the infinitely large area for poetry. Even loss of a love too does it better. Quite touching poem, deserves being the member's PoD.

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Gladys Brown Prince 09 January 2017

With strength of hope, one can always rise again, against hopelessness. Well done.

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murarai birbhum west bengal
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