MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

~ Memo To Missy ~

~ Memo To Missy ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
24 March 23,2012

Beware of fake faux!

Keep reserved
O' Missy
Lucent lambent
Beaming smile.


Clamp curfew on
O' Missy
Your cuddly
Bulging lithe
Lissome bulges
Svelte soigné
Unbloomed lotus.


Deploy cordon on
O' Missy
Your romantic
Gauzy filmy paired
Horizontal leaves
Vertical twin pink petals
Floodgate fairyland.


Fake faux are
Itchin' inchin'
To satiate
Lurid wanton
With canines
Muscle pistons.


They're sacred
For romance by
One n' only:
Chivalrous Beau
Who'll dipdye
Divedie in your hue.


Unfold unveil unwrap
We'll in allness wholeness
For Beau
For adoration consecration

Beware of fake faux!

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Glossary: With humility some glossary given for what I tried to express.
[1] Missy: Young woman
[2] Soigné: Polished and well-groomed; showing sophisticated elegance
[3] Chivalrous: Being attentive to women like an ideal knight

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 24, 2012
Poem Edited: Monday, April 16, 2012

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Comments about ~ Memo To Missy ~ by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

  • Baharak BarzinBaharak Barzin (5/22/2012 1:10:00 PM)

    Nice rhyme my dear
    Your english but your poems look eastern

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  • Joseph Poewhit (5/21/2012 10:10:00 AM)

    Reads like a budding flower - BRAVO

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  • Dale Mullock (5/7/2012 9:29:00 AM)

    Ahh Nivedita, long time since I have read you and I have forgotten how it is to be moved by you. You regale us with a subtly quaint and flabberghasting tale of mythics and tethics rolled in to one, like a supple flower in full bloom proud and beautiful, bending in the winds caress... somehow in the world of naivety, all those knight cannot breach or beseech proper behaviour around a fair maiden lol! Excellently and eloquently descriptive in your wonderful style. Well done and keep on writing like you do. Dale :)

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  • Jenny Gordon (5/6/2012 9:20:00 PM)

    What a laden warning to a virgin to beware the fellows courting her innocence. How deliciously indicative of her blossoming newness and enticement as well as the inherent dangers. Excellent imagery and message. Beautiful.

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  • Rik Bertrand (4/25/2012 10:33:00 AM)

    wow thats intriguing (spl?) . love it.

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  • Reginald Francois (4/24/2012 1:13:00 PM)

    Beautiful Just Beautiful

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  • Ashley - (4/17/2012 4:44:00 PM)

    In simple terms...
    I LOVED IT! ! ! !

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  • Christina Phan (4/16/2012 4:57:00 PM)

    Something new and different. It was so funny and enjoy it very much.10+

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  • Bachha Chakravorty (4/16/2012 12:39:00 PM)

    Is it essentially required to get 'eve-bashing' for a poetess as my earlier commentator wrote? Perfectly not all poetess imbibe form in-built sensitive tracer by very body-eyes-phonetic language &c of such faux / fakes just swarming/mushrooming around globe plus every 15 minutes or less a woman is raped raw-ly /brutally and news paper and other electronic media poring out...these are enough to get the rod-maps of fakes/faux....

    About the poetry I've nothing to add as Gloss Glitter has nice sliced and commented also I must admit Poet Gautam Sen has equally well commented and also other readers

    I must say last stanza the Missy is ready to give allness &c to a real lover...thanks for sharing 10+

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  • nature 360 (4/16/2012 8:52:00 AM)

    This one is good and you always have lots of energy to throw around by such writes so excellent.

    Lol why so you say Fake Faux did you encounter one and let your anger out through your poem hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahaha.

    To be free is every ones birth right so Good.

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  • Anita Trivedi (4/16/2012 4:37:00 AM)

    Good one............ After long time to read your page......... loved it.......

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  • Sankaran AyyaSankaran Ayya (4/14/2012 4:30:00 AM)

    GLOSS GLITTER and GAUTAM SEN have analysed your poem nicely from two different angles
    Your poetry is of different kind; expression and style are something new I think in these columns

    Deploy cordon on
    O' Missy
    Your romantic
    Gauzy filmy paired
    Horizontal leaves
    Vertical twin pink petals
    Floodgate fairyland.
    -beautifully woven lines To say beware of boys simply you took a nice romantic poetic choice French words
    add colors to your poetry thanks for glossary Wishes NIVEDITA
    ====KAVIN CHARALAN

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  • Ramesh RaiRamesh Rai (4/13/2012 2:55:00 AM)

    i agree with Hans. certainly, a good poem with unique style

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  • Shanti Gloss Bagchi Glitter (4/11/2012 1:28:00 PM)

    I like to address this poem as I've understood ~
    [1] '...Lissome bulges
    Svelte soigné
    Unbloomed lotus....'

    [2] '...Your romantic
    Gauzy filmy paired
    Horizontal leaves
    Vertical twin pink petals...'

    This lines are 'ultra-filtered' lines sensual zones of a woman..poet took utmost care to keep up the modesty

    [3] 'fake faux' being a male commentator I can say not all are like that but poets feelings are are very near to truth

    [4] Poet in last four lines dame affirming to give her all

    Excellent and a classy...enjoyed much 10++

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  • Gautam SenGautam Sen (4/10/2012 8:59:00 PM)

    Hello,
    After a pretty long gap I happened to visit this site and read your poem. You've opened you mind towards a virgin mind with your deep thoughts within and a cautionary message altogether you wanted to convey her as I gathered from the whole poem (don't know right or wrong) ... your strong vocabulary added here (sometimes some french improvisation) perhaps helped here to place your message more strongly. For me though it took time too to get the essence of the whole thought. However, as usual its spontaneity moved me. Just keep it up.

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  • Sharad JunejaSharad Juneja (4/8/2012 2:36:00 PM)

    very refined piece of work.. i njoyed it a lot.........

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  • Fadwa GmidenFadwa Gmiden (4/8/2012 5:11:00 AM)

    I love it so much, it shows the reality somehow, keep in good work. I hope you'll read mine :)

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  • Hans VrHans Vr (4/4/2012 11:44:00 PM)

    I like the style and more even the content. We have enough of fake in our world.
    When we are young, we tend to be obseessd by external beauty, all induced by the media
    As we grow a bit mature, we appreciate more and more the inner beauty. Not everybody however matures.
    I think this poem is a very well wrtten poem. Excellent
    Please read my poem, Y., . Ugly
    Excellent, Ms. Niv

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  • Diptesh Augustine SarkarDiptesh Augustine Sarkar (4/4/2012 4:15:00 AM)

    You are an amazing minimalist....I must say.

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  • Diptesh Augustine SarkarDiptesh Augustine Sarkar (4/4/2012 4:10:00 AM)

    Good Work My friend...Keep it up...!

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