Mermaid's Kiss Poem by Crimson Love

Mermaid's Kiss

Rating: 4.8


I stare at this crimson sea,
Whats this a beautiful maiden it seems,
I see the shadow from the depths,
Long flowing hair, my mind is swept,
My eyes do not believe, perhaps they only decieve?
ripples surface, its true...
she's beautiful, This feeling so new,

She stares into my eyes...
Hypnotizing, her love is not advised,
a temptress of sorts,
With beauty only a fool would deny,
foolish perhaps but those are the ones that perhaps survive.

She beckons me to the waters edge,
I humbly kneel, to this beauty my heart I shall pledge,
her desires are clear, she wants that of crimson,
she reaches out, she grabs my hand,
slowly she immerses it, underneath those depths.

I see what she's doing, but I care not,
slowly She pulls me into the water...
theres no fight to be fought.
She wants my life she may have it,
Given without hesitation, she pulls me under this crimson sea,
holding me tight I'm suffocating,
With on final breath, my words escape me,
one kiss as I die is laid upon a mermaids lips,
here we sink, one moment of bliss,
could you resist that of a mermaids kiss?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lenore Lee 17 October 2011

Gorgeous poem and if there was a choice between a crimson kiss and a mermaid's kiss, anyone that is sane (or insane!) would choose crimson.

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Hosny Soliman 17 October 2011

For sure no one can resist your mermaid's kiss, also your lovely poem.So emotional lovely dream.

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Stefanie Fontker 17 October 2011

Seductive, very emotional. A lovely story told through poetry. Great work, love.

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