Mesh And Web Poem by Daniel Brick

Mesh And Web

Rating: 5.0


The Creator God was exhausted,
ready to withdraw into divine
solitude, build for himself
a Temple of Wisdom and henceforth
from its dizzying heights observe
the patterns of stars and planets.
But can a Creator God withdraw,
abandoning what he brought forth
out of Chaos eons past when he felt
the full flush of Divine Glory?
He made it all come forth - plants,
waterways, beasts, precious stones,
liquor, sexual beings, hills and
valleys. Then, only then, did he realize
he would labor, and must labor to make
the whole endeavor succeed. To make
created things mesh into a unity and
thereby simply operate - without the need
for his constant vigilance. He sometimes
wished he could fall down immense corridors
of space into the web of things, limited things,
neither possessed of power nor of knowledge,
just existence, fleeting but sweet, gone
in a flash, and then perpetual rest forever.
Or perhaps not forever, perhaps there is something
other than forever, which is only repetition -
over and over and over... But what could
could that other things be? Can I create that
OTHER THING? he wondered. Hr remained on his throne,
no longer thinking of ascent or descent, but
in his mind revolving thoughts that moved
with majesty and certainty, as they had
wins ago at the beginning of created things.
I will summon my deep powers. I will bring forth
new things, I will become the Wonder of a New Creation!

Saturday, July 29, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: creativity,myth
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Galina Italyanskaya 12 August 2017

It's a very uplifting poem. Especially two lines in the end) Maybe it was so, and somebody had created this world and left, being sure that the world will cope with everything itself.

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Roseann Shawiak 31 July 2017

Great poem, infinite depths that you've covered quite well in it's lines. Very thought-provoking and intense, we rarely think about the difficulties of God's creations, He must be constantly on the move, watching and keeping everything on track. Love how you expressed it so simply with great detail. Wonderfully inspiring poem, Daniel. Thank you very much for sharing. RoseAnn

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Glen Kappy 30 July 2017

Hey, Daniel! One of the things that comes to mind on reading this is the difference between deism and theism. Something comforting to me is Jesus saying something like, my Father has been at work to this very day and so do I. -Glen

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Sandra Feldman 29 July 2017

A very deep and fascinating plunge into the mysteries of creation, going even further than creation itself in an evolutionary opening that is not closed yet. That may still happen..... Great poets have great thoughts far beyond the ordinary. t's also called creativity.

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