Message In Between Titles- -Number 4 Poem by Susan Williams

Message In Between Titles- -Number 4

Rating: 5.0


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................................Warning.
I told you my time here was limited and my computer had eaten fruit from
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~~~~~~2020 susan williams
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Monday, December 21, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: absence,computer
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Author's Note.When my computer died, I was without means to get on PoemHunters. I was bored so I decided to invent a new poem structure. You take a famous poem's title and make it the opening to your own poem. Then you write a line of your own and try to connect it to Famous Title 1on the first line and Famous Title 2 on the third line that concludes your poem. Now I know there's a Grinch out there that will call this Plagiarism but since I only mentioned the famous titles, phooey on Mr. Wet Blanket. I had to do something or go crazy...... or crazier.Love being back, you all.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 19 January 2021

Interesting......like it....

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Sandra Feldman 21 December 2020

I like your new created poetic form. Very clever and concise. Imaginative and nice. Good work, dear Susan. Merry Xmas and and all the rest, Happy New Year, cause you're the best!

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Susan Williams 28 December 2020

I love your poetic comments! They tickle me! I swear your grocery lists probably rhyme as well! ! The mark of a poet! ! ! You are the best and brightest light. Thank you!

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Susan Williams 28 December 2020

I just wrote a reply and it flew away into anonymity. PH at work.

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Cowboy Ron Williams 21 December 2020

I'm glad at last that you are back. Sorry your computer was out of whack.

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Susan Williams 28 December 2020

But Santa brought me this glorious new one and it flies through the work I set out for it to do! Good to see you again, Cowboy!

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Unnikrishnan E S 21 December 2020

Hilarious, Susie. Loved the humour. If I am allowed a little plagiarism too, I would state: “Humour in times of COVID-19 “. Thank you. Very good to see you back here.

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Susan Williams 28 December 2020

Glad it put a smile on my friend's face! I enjoyed being back till I saw what PH did to this site. Sigh.

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