Metamorphosis Poem by Alexandrian Ink

Metamorphosis

Rating: 4.7


Time from its premitive
Has been sensitive with nature
Growing and changing in a holistic perspetive;
A dance for every creature.

Little from the infantry
Somethings could horror hold
In a told contrasted repulsive story,
Which chastises my fiddle mind.

A tale of spirits, the dancing ghost
Of creatures hovering in the night dark
The dreadful stories of the evil forest
Of gods, the bloody sun and all that probes alike.

Little by little and little again
All that beest illusion fades and fades
And the little boy irreversibly attain
The full stature of who he is.
But am perplexed to find me, like this.

His temerity strong and skills undoubted
Brave beyond what mediocres know.
This is the beat of ancient tide
But I think the young shall grow.

#Dabi_Alexon

Metamorphosis
Tuesday, November 7, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: growth
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 05 December 2017

Congratulations on Member Poem of the Day!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 05 December 2017

An unusual poem presented in a most interesting way. The picture too is eye catching...... when meiosis and mitosis take place..... wow! This is the dance of every creature! This is the beat of ancient tide. Superb! Heartiest Congratulations! Oduma Alex, you truly deserve this honour. A full vote for you!

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Akhtar Jawad 05 December 2017

A great informative poem, congrats for its selection as members poem of the day.

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Tom Allport 05 December 2017

a poem of how life ebbs and flows into lots of different things and creatures all ready to go? ............well penned Oduma

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Richard Wlodarski 05 December 2017

Wonderful theme. Beautifully written. Oduma, Congratulations On Poem Of The Day!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 November 2018

It is a great informative poem so touchingly executed having nice penmanship. I am glad that it had been selected as the poem of the day. Thanks and congratulations.

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Lyn Paul 05 December 2017

Such an interesting write. Lovely poem.

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Savita Tyagi 05 December 2017

Good poem to read. Amazing is mystery of Metamorphosis! Congratulations and thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 December 2017

For every creature! Thanks for sharing.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 05 December 2017

How to explain the process of metamorphosis seems for a time a mystery still for instance Venus herself is not the more comforted by this metamorphosis needs to be evolved, mature and emerged........very creative indeed.........full credit.......thanks for sharing

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