Midnight Play Poem by Vijay Sai R

Midnight Play

Rating: 3.7


Eerie silence everywhere
As my clock strikes its gong
Twelve sweet chimes
Haunts my living room
Surrounds the entire space
Waking me up slightly
Looking somewhat frightened
I got up from my bed
Chilly weather outside
I peek through my glass window
Sparkling silver dots in a black curtain
Back to bed again
I begin to ponder
What made me to wake up
In this wee hour of midnight
A faint flip
A hissing hustle
A rattling whistle
Spines chilling
I gazed at the corner
Where it all emerged
Still the same pattern
A hustle, a whistle, a rattle
Gathering courage, I followed the rhythm
All I could find
A sleeping pill!
A dancing aluminum foil!
Enough to give me a sleepless night!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Karoliena Somura 08 June 2012

Thats not the style of peotry im into, but interesting word choices.

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Mwangi Dorcas 23 March 2012

excellent flow you got

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Kumar Parashar 21 March 2012

he he nice man...real nice...i liked the humour at the end and the word usage...way to go buddy

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Marina Gasbey 20 July 2010

Ha ha. I'm sorry for your sleepless nights, just having one right now actually :) My cat would not stop 'meowing' so I had to put her in the laundry room. Now I can't sleep! Excellent poetry though Vijay! .... Marina Gasbey...

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Gan Chennai 24 May 2010

Yes! Some noises do irritate and give sleepless nights. Viz Calendars scratching the walls, under the fan. I would getup, pull it and throw it. But still the pages would flip and make some noise.I would put some weight and proceed to sleep, only to find a sleepless night. Nice Poem.

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Young Church Poetry 19 April 2013

Well written, I could see the picture in my head. Amazing piece

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Michael Oliver 18 April 2013

A silence captured- existential ocean deep with portent - Iiked this a lot

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Jahan Zeb 30 November 2012

Wow! loved it. You got me thinking what that was. Great picture created.......... I thought what it would be.... A dancing aluminum foil! ... Well Written.

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Latasha Diane Terry 30 November 2012

Lovely words, keep up the good work!

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Lenore Lee 12 November 2012

So true, how the midnight hour is so full of fear due to childhood stories. Reminds me of my poem, 'Phobia'. A wonderful write, well penned.

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Vijay Sai R

Vijay Sai R

Trichy, South India
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