Mind And Emotion Poem by Romeo Della Valle

Mind And Emotion

Rating: 5.0


Volumes of emotion
Suppressed inside each thought
With stubborn penetration...
Membranes of consciousness
Break the captivity
Of dependency
And become self-entity...

Like stolen articles,
These elements of mind
Kept inside are skeptical
Of rightful ownership
And knowing the persuasion
Of selfless division,
Give back composition...

Plucked at the peak of sadness,
Emotion's flavor
Is captured in essence...


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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raymond Uyok 10 October 2011

This may look easy at first, but gets deeper as one tries to delve into it. Good job.

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invalid Files 07 October 2011

wow this is really good! It somehow flowed easily, and I really enjoyed reading this!

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Hans Vr 05 October 2011

Yes, Romeo, very well written.

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Vipins Puthooran 29 September 2011

(Plucked at the peak of sadness) , I like this line...emotions suppressing the thoughts and sometimes stabbing my consciousness of conscience also... Really a wonderful poem. A vivid write... Enjoy a lot...

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Eric Cockrell 26 September 2011

and the formless begats form! ! good poem.

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