Mine Poem by Lilian Moore

Mine

Rating: 4.7


I made a sand castle.
In rolled the sea.
'All sand castles
belong to me—
to me,'
said the sea.

I dug sand tunnels.
In flowed the sea.
'All sand tunnels
belong to me—
to me,'
said the sea.

I saw my sand pail floating free.
I ran and snatched it from the sea.
'My sand pail
belongs to me—
to ME!'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 20 September 2015

Lilian Moore was loved for her children's stories and poems. This one is very cute and is geared for children. So is her other one that is posted on this site: Hey, bug, stay! Don't run away. I know a game that we can play. I'll hold my fingers very still And you can climb a finger-hill. No, no. Don't go. Here's a wall - a tower, too, A tiny bug town, just for you. I've a cookie. You have some. Take this oatmeal cookie crumb. Hey, bug, stay! Hey, bug! Hey!

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Terry Craddock 20 September 2015

Simple clever and invokes many childhood memories, especially the last verse, which was awash with memories.

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Terry Craddock 22 November 2015

Gold Mine Or Minefield childhood memories gold mine or minefield early days defenseless at absolute mercy of parent whims Copyright © Terence George Craddock Split image from the poem 'Childhood Lotto Tickets Birth Issued' by Terence George Craddock. Inspired by the poem 'Mine' by Lilian Moore. Dedicated to the poet Lilian Moore.

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Terry Craddock 22 November 2015

Birth Blessed Or Damned? good parents life blessed bad parents keepers cursed birth born blessed damned Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Mine' by Lilian Moore. Dedicated to the poet Lilian Moore. Split image from the poem 'Childhood Lotto Tickets Birth Issued' by Terence George Craddock. Written in September 2015 on the 21.9.2015.

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Seema Jayaraman 20 September 2015

my young son's lost their pail to the waves at the beach last summer and since then they proclaim they don't like the sea anymore..i will read this poem to them..well written

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Rajnish Manga 07 February 2016

Nature has its own way but the man has learnt to co-exist with it since time immemorial. Lovely imagery. Thanks.

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Roxanne Dubarry 07 February 2016

I love your simple inspirational poetry!

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Susan Williams 07 February 2016

And we adults build our cities and our monuments and the earth quakes and the tsunamis drown and wildfires burn.... what really belongs to humans?

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Ratnakar Mandlik 07 February 2016

An amazing out break of expression coming out of a forlorn soul engrossed in solitude. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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M Asim Nehal 07 February 2016

Nicely written........

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