Mine Poem by Dawn Novus

Mine

Rating: 5.0


Beautiful one
It had begun
I touched your face
And unearthed the sun

Cry my eyes
Do not disguise
This flow running through me
Is yours and is mine

You started this
Your catalyst
Your underbreath giggles
Were my only bliss

I love you the most
I'll make you some toast
Just play the piano
My tech coloured coat

Monday, November 13, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: soul mate
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 19 November 2017

I love you the most! ! THIS FLOW RUNNING THROUGH ME! ! You're my soul mate. Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 November 2017

You started this Your catalyst Your underbreath giggles Were my only bliss..feeling of a soul mate is so fine. Beautiful poem shared. Thanks.

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Lauren 17 November 2017

Thank you so much Kumarmarni. You are so gracious. It means so much.

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Genova Maaa 22 November 2017

This flow running through me Is yours and is mine.. lovely poem........... soulmate, love, romance, love in depths described so oooo well dear poetess. thank you. genova

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Adilson Pinto 23 November 2017

A romantic poem, full of sensitivity and art! I loved to read it! Congratulations! Please accept a strong hug from Brazil! And thank you for your visit in my page!

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Akhtar Jawad 15 April 2018

In love all that is mine is in fact hers and all that is hers is in fact mine, never weigh this exchange on a bitter balance.

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Jette Blackstone 12 December 2017

This is such a romantic little poem. Love it! Just play the piano my tech-colored coat.... Thanks for sharing.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 November 2017

A thrilling piece! I should not forget to quote, Cry my eyes/Do not disguise/This flow running through me Is yours and is mine....10/10

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Binayakumar Mohanty 26 November 2017

Emotion enchanting.Nicely crafted.Thanks for sharing.

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Adilson Pinto 23 November 2017

10 for this poem dear poetess!

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