mirror
mirror
on
the wall
why we use you?
why we need you?
why we adore you?
why we look at you?
before we're working
before we're meeting
before we're partying
before we're sleeping
before we're touring
before we're studying
before we're shopping
before we're socializing
why we should love you?
why we should touch you?
why we should clean you?
why we should depend on you?
after we're bathing
after we're diving
after we're surfing
after we're swimming
after we're flying
after we're hiking
after we're camping
after we're bicyling
seconds
minutes
hours
days
our hair
our face
our neck
our body
you copy us
you reflect us
you multiply us
you accompany us
can you copy our heart?
can you reflect our mind?
can you multiply our feeling?
can you accompany our loneliness?
do we ever ask you?
what we have felt?
do we ever ask you?
what we have think?
do we ever ask you?
what we have done?
we see cute of us in you
we see strong of us in you
we see perfect of us in you
we see beautiful of us in you
we see handsome of us in you
do we ever ask our heart?
what we have felt to nature?
do we ever ask our heart?
what we have think to humanity?
do we ever ask our heart?
what we have done to flora fauna?
mirror
mirror
on
the wall
Ahamad, Great repetition. I like how you pointed out how we seem to be prisoners of the mirror. I like the fact that you kept the beat of your poem. Good job! Warm Regards, Starrbox =)
WE CAN TELL THE MIRROR THAT WE LOVE OURSELVES, THAT THE REFLECTED IMAGE IS OKAY AND THAT WE CAN ACCOMPLISH ANYTHING, BUT YOUR POEM HAS JUST GIVEN ME CHILLS. YOU EXAMINE, YOU ASK THE RIGHT QUESTIONS ALWAYS. YES, WE SHOULD BE ABLE TO LOOK BEYOND OURSELVES. ACCEPT OURSELVES, YES, BUT MOVE ON TO WHAT AWAITS AND TO THOSE THINGS AND PEOPLE AND CREATURES THAT NEED OUR STRENGTH AND GOOD WILL. THE ONLY BEAUTY THAT MATTERS IS THE BEAUTY OF SPIRIT WITHIN US! KUDOS TO YOU, SIR. CAROL
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
An excellent poem with mirror! 10+++