Ahmad Shiddiqi

Rookie - 6 Points (March 7,1974 / Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia)

A Healthy Life Aria - Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

who knows?
keep writing!
keep on rhyming!
enjoy your life!

who knows?
keep trying!
keep on moving!
sense your love!

who knows?
keep going!
keep on searching!
feel your energy!

who knows?
keep singing!
keep on dancing!
touch your aura!

who knows?
keep drawing!
keep on blushing!
shine your charm!

what a frozen Winter heart!
let me warm it for your beauty
what's the use of sharp looking?
we won't act it in a dark mood

wait, sweetheart
it's a moonlit night
an Eastern moon
is near our spirits here

who we are?
we are poets
what we do?
we paint words

how we live?
we beautify life
when we really enjoy?
if we redecorate rhymes

love songs comes
to irregular visions
to irresistible dreams
to crowned castles in heaven

we've a soul of gentle air
our distance hopes
our delicious synergies
melted at once into a nostalgic fog

let's rejoice in peace!
let fate smile upon us!
tender and beautiful blossoms
of my beloved plain, tree of love

may thunder, lightning, flood, and storms
never bother you, O dear oceanic hearts!
nor may you be profaned by blowing winds
or shade of a crisis on your turbulent activities

cheer to other!
sweeten to unknown!
smile for awhile!
kind for beloved!

variety to improve
harmony to share
freshness to explore
exhale, inhale to groove

show your love!
grow your confidence!
paint your balance!
spread your prayer!

much ado
about caring
precious style
in your own trail

once upon a time
in a twilight cell
ring your bell!
have a good time!

(dedicated to a great poet at poemhunter, Rajaram Ramachandran)

Comments about A Healthy Life Aria by Ahmad Shiddiqi

  • (5/23/2010 2:17:00 PM)

    ‘who we are? /we are poets/what we do? /we paint words’

    A Tall Yeah…

    ‘Poets enliven words
    Poets bring life to dead words
    Poets add jingle to words
    Poets bring vive in heart of readers
    Finally Poets merges with and in words’ ~ niv

    Excellent poem Sir
    Ms. Nivedita
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  • (11/14/2009 10:23:00 PM)

    Lilting, staccato, cresendo, decresendo - Aria Arbitrio!
    stay positive, Joshua C.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/9/2009 7:53:00 PM)

    who knows?
    keep writing!
    keep on rhyming!
    enjoy your life! .................keep on moving.keep on writing ..some day it will pay...bneautiful write....10

    read mine not easy...open page... beauty
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  • (9/13/2009 9:16:00 AM)

    A befitting piece for dedication. (Report) Reply

  • Rajaram Ramachandran (5/17/2009 10:14:00 AM)

    Thank you for your kindness to dedicate this poem to me. Only you are a blessed one to write such powerful poems. May God bless you with all the
    fortunes you richly deserve for your sincere and kind heart.
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  • (4/23/2009 4:50:00 PM)

    Well done
    Dear poet
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  • Malini Kadir (4/22/2009 4:00:00 AM)

    natural, casual.......presentation.....
    sweeping all the poets hearts no doubt!
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  • (4/18/2009 4:28:00 PM)

    we need encouragement and inspiration
    thanks for this
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  • (4/17/2009 4:51:00 PM)

    Amazing poem

    and very beautiful
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  • (4/17/2009 4:05:00 AM)

    beautiful piece! really makes me happy of being a poet! ! i really like it! (Report) Reply

  • (4/15/2009 1:08:00 PM)

    wow, i don't think i've ever read such a lovely poem with such friendly advice on life...good read and maybe u should write more poems like these, i think these might be ur best to write. thanks for sharing

    -Every rose starts out as an ash-Ashes 2 Roses :)
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  • (4/14/2009 4:56:00 AM)

    keep singing, keep dancing, keep drawing and plz plz plz.. keep writing and sharing these b'ful poems.... thnks.. :) (Report) Reply

  • (4/14/2009 1:43:00 AM)

    a poem of a poet....everything seems alright....and beautiful as a child
    ....a poem that gives us inspiration....an outlooks that apoet have to stand..thank you my friend for sharing this precious thought of yours....God bless a 10+
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  • Victor Sklyarov (4/13/2009 7:10:00 PM)

    A very optimistic and healthy poem. +10 (Report) Reply

  • (4/13/2009 11:09:00 AM)

    Speaks well of us poets in the center ring of the poetry circus. POPCORN - CRACKERJACKS - ICE CREAM - SODA - etc - etc. [ the show must go on ] (Report) Reply

  • (4/13/2009 8:50:00 AM)

    a positive flow............well penned (Report) Reply

  • (4/13/2009 6:32:00 AM)

    beautiful poem..well written...another poem with full of sense dear, , , i like the presentation of this poem, ..very casual...i like this piece..
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  • (4/13/2009 5:06:00 AM)

    Sweet flow
    great work
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  • (4/13/2009 4:56:00 AM)

    Sweet state of presence, i can enjoy while reading this nice poem bro
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  • Supriya Prathapan (4/13/2009 2:29:00 AM)

    How often do we forget that we are mortals after all. Its important to relish each moment of life.10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 9, 2009

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 16, 2009

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