Whiter than white,
Purer than snow.
A virginal saint,
You'd like to know.
Always the first,
To say how are you.
How can I help,
What can I do.
Caring and sharing,
All day through.
When you are ill.
She'll look after you.
Never the bearer,
Of any bad news.
A heaven sent teen,
One to amuse.
She simply exists,
Her name I did choose.
I simply call her,
Miss Goody Two Shoes.
For she holds secrets,
So dark and vile.
She loves to murder,
With her twisted smile.
She is a sick bitch,
A remorseless banshee.
She's killed hundreds,
With gratuitous glee.
For I'm the cop,
Who's on her case.
This Miss Goody Two Shoes,
With an angelic face.
She'll call on you,
So late at night.
Pretend she's lost,
So sad her plight.
You invite her in,
With such a thrill.
This innocent teen,
Who's dressed to kill.
She'll drug you up,
Half knock you out.
She enjoys her work,
You'll bleed and shout.
She'll draw you in,
Then cut your throat.
Over your carcass,
She'll dance and gloat.
She kills at random,
She kills for a kick.
Her jigsaw's aftermath,
So appalling and sick.
They think they're safe,
No harm will come.
But always with her,
Death will be done.
She'll sucker men in,
By playing cupids.
When they are drowsy,
Cut off their eyelids.
She'll strap you down,
Slowly skin you alive.
For you and your kind,
Her creativity does thrive.
Your blood will flow,
Your heart will race.
The last thing you see,
Is her smiling face.
With razor in hand,
She'll cut and she'll splice.
She'll tease and she'll toy,
She's so very precise.
And last to be severed,
You'll miss the most.
Fountains of blood,
Turning white as a ghost.
She will not stop,
She'll never falter.
All evil sacrificed,
Upon her bloody altar.
Her innocence stolen,
That wicked day.
She seeks payback,
In her own way.
A teenage grim reaper,
She's death incarnate.
Never mixed morals,
Her mind does debate.
She can't be stopped,
She's one of a kind.
So intensely driven,
With a killer's mind.
She is so macabre,
But no necrophile.
Each victim is,
A sick paedophile.
I will never catch her,
She loves her fun and games.
I text her very often,
And give her all their names.
Copyright Shaun Cronick.2019. All Rights Reserved.
Wow! Horror movie on screen is all I glanced on reading tho wonderful work of yours.... I couldn't shift to next one until ran down to the end.
Thank you for your kind comment Queeny. Glad you enjoyed it. Take care.
Excellent write, Shaun. A beautiful and vivid depiction of darkness and cruelty. In just a couple of minutes I was able to watch a horror movie. Superb imagery. And so gripping. My eyes are drawn to the captivating lines in this marvelous poem. A poetic gem indeed. Onto my Poem List.
Than you Rose Marie for your kind comments on all the versions. And this is it I'm all goody two shoed out. This murderous teen must be exhausted even psychopaths need a break and possibly team up with The Lady Killer, but that's a story for another time, hint, hint. I thank you again good Rose Marie. Take care.
An insightful depiction of an evil enchantress written with clarity of thought and mind. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing, Shaun.
Many thanks for your most gracious comment Chinedu. And many thanks for your timeless and so respectful poem Mandela- The Immortal Icon. I thank you again good sir.
It is amazing horror poem, always you are writing differently, bringing new themes with rare imaginary, that is make you a professional poet....++10 from me Dear Shaun the great poet
Thanks again Soran for your kind comments. Glad you enjoyed it. You use the words professional and great, I'm far from those words, simply a person like your good self and many more who enjoy writing and sharing. I thank you again and I have a week off to read and appraise honestly ALL your poems and I'm looking forward to it. Take care man.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Fantastic Shaun! A killer thriller. Very proud of you. Devilishly dark and cinematically (de) composed. Brava! :)
Thanks Alice and thank you for a dastardly daunting devilishly deliciously dark daringly dazzling and drop dead comment. May you good Alice and the loved ones around you live a long life and lives filled with virtue. I wish the best this world has to offer. Take care Alice. Shaun.