poet Hasmukh Amathalal

Hasmukh Amathalal

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Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the first to realize it fast
Reality known but never wore any kind of mast,

Your innocence and name is kind to infuse
Kind words for me but not meant to confuse
Time was for decision but you never refused
Always stood at right point and crisis defused

Even amidst delicate moments
You did not offer a word or comments
You were hurt most but you used simple word,
Is it blessings to you or gift from Lord?

I loved you most as your dearest friend
Still you didn't put any word at the end,
Kept me at dark or asked or any excuse
Used otherwise it as pretext, denied or refused

'Miss' I miss you but you don't miss,
Did not expect from you kind hug or simple kiss
Not even kind gesture or more of any show
Still I miss you and never beat eye brow

Will this uncertainty remain or go?
Life will be full of remorse but still I would forgo
Is there any restriction from your side or embargo?
You bear always 'no entry' smile with logo

You called on me for good luck and best wishes
I remained dead as no water was available for fish,
May be it is very hard to swallow for some reasons
Why then there should be drought without any season?

I was quick to grasp situation,
Avoided unwarranted efforts for persuasion,
Shock was sudden and heavy but came very late,
I did accept it with grace and as part of fate

She didn't become mine for some reasons
I waited simply for spring season
She too eagerly longed for strong bond
As I was inclined and very fond

She had everything to loose
But she had no option to choose
Why did she take extreme step?
She always used to call me as sweet babe

It may be her way of thinking
It left me high and dry with blinking
What should I call her sacrifice?
A step of dedication or break of promises?

Topic(s) of this poem: poem

Poem Submitted: Friday, April 17, 2009
Poem Edited: Thursday, December 31, 2015

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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/12/2020 11:21:00 AM)

    Poem: 16893249 - Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###
    Member: Suresh Kumar
    Comment: classical sir,
    Admirations

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  • Suresh Kumar EkSuresh Kumar Ek (9/12/2020 7:46:00 AM)

    classical sir,
    Admirations

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  • Observant (1/4/2020 12:30:00 AM)

    Did u know Magdaha Rani is Dillip Swain. He has manipulated the site to make Rani with 13 poems fourth in popularity. All he does is moan about others. He should be kicked off the site.

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  • Abhishek Singh (12/13/2019 7:39:00 AM)

    Beautifully written sir...

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  • Bharat JagwaniBharat Jagwani (12/10/2019 11:53:00 PM)

    nice lines...

    You also can read my poem Zindagi- Ek Paheli

    Thanks

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  • Chima OnonogbuChima Ononogbu (9/11/2019 6:49:00 AM)

    Beautiful.

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  • A B Faniki (8/7/2019 1:42:00 PM)

    Nice ballad. Thanks for sharing such lovely work. Thus a bit long. Cheers

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  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (7/10/2019 8:42:00 AM)

    Miss' I miss you but you don't miss,
    Did not expect from you kind hug or simple kiss
    Not even kind gesture or more of any show
    Still I miss you and never beat eye brow....outstanding conceptualization. A great poem is amazingly shared. Thank you dear sir for sharing this beautiful poem with us.

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  • Anu MehtaAnu Mehta (6/11/2019 12:41:00 AM)

    Nice one
    Thank for sharing the poem with us..

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  • Archita KumarArchita Kumar (5/15/2019 1:47:00 PM)

    Very wonderful poem.Its a sort of sarcastic love poem.You are blaming her but not blaming her also. The deep impact of thoughts with real emotions have been captured in this poem.Thank for sharing the poem with us.

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  • Prabir GayenPrabir Gayen (5/8/2019 10:47:00 PM)

    It may be her way of thinking
    It left me high and dry with blinking
    What should I call her sacrifice?
    A step of dedication or break of promises..
    ...very beautiful poem..thanks

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  • Mahtab BangaleeMahtab Bangalee (5/7/2019 4:32:00 AM)

    the great and fabulous; like to quote -

    Your innocence and name is kind to infuse
    Kind words for me but not meant to confuse
    Time was for decision but you never refused
    Always stood at right point and crisis defused.../// love it

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  • Stephen jnr (4/21/2019 8:09:00 AM)

    Good one

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  • Me Poet Yeps PoetMe Poet Yeps Poet (4/14/2019 9:07:00 PM)

    VERY INFECTIOUS SMILE AMANTHA POET
    LOVELY GIRL
    I ALSO SMILE
    ALL LOVE ME

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  • Eden TrinidadEden Trinidad (3/17/2019 8:29:00 AM)

    Great Poet. Imagine, he has written 21k poems and still scribbling everyday.

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  • Jaisal (2/18/2019 11:09:00 AM)

    Superb

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  • Dr Dillip Swain (1/9/2019 12:31:00 AM)

    This poet is favoured by the site owners. We all know he has no talent.

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  • Tamara Beryl LathamTamara Beryl Latham (10/31/2018 11:59:00 AM)

    You've expressed nicely in this poem your true feelings for a loved one. Thanks for sharing. : -)

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  • Gajanan MishraGajanan Mishra (10/12/2018 7:11:00 AM)

    take care not to go wrong, fine

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  • februarybaby (5/21/2018 8:05:00 AM)

    Wowww...So deep and wonderful

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