Missing Pieces Poem by Asif Baloch

Missing Pieces

Rating: 5.0


dreams are wondering
in foggy mist
trying and searching
for love filled bliss

bliss
alas! bliss

life is shattered
like broken glass
memories are mingled
like jigsaw puzzle
thoughts are
in the search of
missing pieces

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Omar Ali Sabar 08 December 2008

Yes... Wonderful first stanza... A great poem worthy of 10.. quality

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A well written poem my favorite is the 1st stanza. Great JOB

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Dr Kamran Haider 07 December 2008

I like your works because of simplicity and purity of your mind and style... I can relate many things to myself, still you are much beyond that I could compare myself with you... Great write indeed... so simple, deep and really touches the heart and soul of a reader... Always keep that purity alive my brother... Thanks for sharing this lovely piece with me... Regrads, Kamran

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Mohammed Albalushi 06 December 2008

dreams are wondering in foggy mist trying and searching for love filled bliss, we all searching of it, hope you find yours, very lovely poem touch my heart

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Sathyanarayana M V S 06 December 2008

'Thoughts are in search of missing pieces' Wow Bhayya. beautiful inddeeeed.10

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Asif The missing pieces of a jigsaw is an excellent title and theme. As the poem was fairly short and the imagery wonderful, I found it had a direct impact on me. Well done! Karin Anderson

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Pink Butterfly ... 02 February 2009

dreams are wondering in foggy mist trying and searching for love filled bliss .......wonderful lines! ! ! I really love it!

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Anjali Sinha 09 December 2008

'life is shatered like broken glass memories are mingled like jigsaw puzzel thoughts are in the search of missing pieces ' I particularly liked this last stanza beautiful as alwys the enigmatic Asif +++++++++10 anjali

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Naru Kaede 09 December 2008

We always try, the missing piece of life, And try to find the way to go out, This poem is so great, something like I try to find now... I trying to find the 'Missing Piece' Woww, , the great one, , Love it so much... Naru Kaede,

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Seema Aarella 08 December 2008

An enigmatic write of tangled feelings and random emotions!

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