Missing You Poem by Jazlle D. H. **contentment is the key to happiness

Missing You

Rating: 4.4


I miss
the kiss
that takes
away my
stress.

I miss
the hug
that makes
me feel
snug.

I miss
the smile
that can
make me
fine.

I miss
the day
when you
want me to
stay.

I miss
the time
when we
play and
climb.

I miss
the walk
holding
your hand so
tight.

I miss
your voice
saying...
Mom, I love
you!


1st of May 2008
This poem is lovingly dedicated to Jazzper and Jiselle Luene.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
H K 18 May 2008

A nice and refreshing write!

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Tia Maria 29 June 2008

I find myself wondering if your babies are all grown up or what? It's such a heartwrenching piece...

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Arhoz Anvi 03 July 2008

lovely... Mashallah...

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Sarwar Chowdhury 05 July 2008

wow! what a naive, lovely poem!

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Ravi Sathasivam 06 July 2008

Lovely poem. Nicely written. Pls read my poem ' I miss you my love' Thanks Ravi

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 September 2008

A very nice on your records.Yes, in this life, we all do miss one another.Keep on writing Joan. E.K.L.

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Colin Jeffery 04 September 2008

This is such a good poem. Brilliant

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Yushi Tursina 31 August 2008

wow, its simple but meaningful, so sweet

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Tom Balch 24 August 2008

What a warm and meaningful poem, so full of love.

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Triste Mujer 18 August 2008

Oh a poem that will always touch the heart of every mom. Well done Joan.

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