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Mom's Smiles - Poem by me poet yeps poet

Very sentimental poetry....
I recall my mom’s last eyes....
no tears....
Smiles as she passed by
tears did not then come into my eyes I too smiled
Then it rained all day and night
mom’s smiles went away
now I thirst for those looks till today
as she passed away

it rains till today
nearly five decades away
she still smiles daily at me
I my mom can see
smiling with me

It does no longer rain
now it only snows
heaven knows
when she calls out to me
when are you coming?
I smile back and ask
Are you still waiting for me?

Topic(s) of this poem: love


Comments about Mom's Smiles by me poet yeps poet

  • James MclainJames Mclain (4/4/2020 4:26:00 PM)

    He or She who awaits the coming
    of the one their waiting for shall wait no more.
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  • Gary James SmithGary James Smith (3/26/2020 1:35:00 AM)

    Very nicely written poem (Report)Reply

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  • B.m. BiswasB.m. Biswas (3/20/2020 10:37:00 AM)

    The pathos is depicted in such a style with a true love that it almost toch to the tragedy but your smile here win over tragedy as it is moms smile.......A great poem indeed...a documentary actually. (Report)Reply

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  • Indira RenganathanIndira Renganathan (2/27/2020 9:42:00 AM)

    Everyone is for ever a child to his or her mother despite growing old and despite oneself being a parent...you have poured out your emotions as that of a child longing for its gone mom literally...great work 10/10...thank you for your kind visit and the comment on my poem (Report)Reply

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  • Lily IvesLily Ives (2/18/2020 12:03:00 AM)

    Oh' magical and nostalgic. I could cry. Thank you for sharing it (Report)Reply

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  • Kesav EaswaranKesav Easwaran (2/7/2020 5:56:00 AM)

    Apropos to your request this day, I let you know I have already visited your page and commented on your this poem one year back it self. For your viewing

    " Mother is special. A sentiment to hold ever, a property to own. liked your poem 10/10"
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  • Akham Nilabirdhwaja SinghAkham Nilabirdhwaja Singh (1/30/2020 7:43:00 AM)

    Mom's smiles-very beautifully penned. (Report)Reply

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  • Poet PoetPoet Poet (1/17/2020 3:02:00 AM)

    You have the vision few have
    .....and we are all glad
    that you are a great poet
    doc...I smile back and ask/Are you still waiting for me? I can delve into the fathomless beauty hidden in this great inquisition! A great poem that demands repeated visits! You have given us a wonderful gift in the form of this endearing piece of poetry!
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  • Dr Dillip K SwainDr Dillip K Swain (1/17/2020 1:13:00 AM)

    I smile back and ask/Are you still waiting for me? I can delve into the fathomless beauty hidden in this great inquisition! A great poem that demands repeated visits! You have given us a wonderful gift in the form of this endearing piece of poetry! (Report)Reply

    Poet PoetPoet Poet(1/17/2020 3:02:00 AM)

    You have the vision few have
    and we are all glad
    that you are a great poet
    doc...I smile back and ask/Are you still waiting for me? I can delve into the fathomless beauty hidden in this great inquisition! A great poem that demands repeated visits! You have given us a wonderful gift in the form of this endearing piece of poetry!

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  • Poet PoetPoet Poet (1/4/2020 12:30:00 AM)

    The candle flickers
    till its end
    till early dawn
    takes over
    a lfe is only
    for one to remember
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  • Mrudula Rani (1/3/2020 4:52:00 PM)

    An endless longing for that comforting source is very distinct! (Report)Reply

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  • Gloria Birtwhistle (1/3/2020 5:33:00 AM)

    Top poem poet. Greatness is on your shoulders. (Report)Reply

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  • Irfanulla Shariff (12/31/2019 4:37:00 PM)

    A great dedication to your mother in form of poetry. Very well penned! 10+ (Report)Reply

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  • Dillip Swain (12/29/2019 4:52:00 PM)

    You Are a thief. Stealing my girlfriend's place. Shame on you! (Report)Reply

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  • Kesav EaswaranKesav Easwaran (12/21/2019 7:46:00 AM)

    Mother is special. A sentiment to hold ever, a property to own. liked your poem 10/10 (Report)Reply

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  • George SamuelGeorge Samuel (12/16/2019 11:54:00 AM)

    extremely sober great poem thanks for sharing (Report)Reply

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  • Mamunur Rahman KayesMamunur Rahman Kayes (12/15/2019 4:34:00 AM)

    when she calls out to me
    when are you coming? ...very beautifully art the way of wants
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  • Sankaran AyyaSankaran Ayya (12/12/2019 9:44:00 PM)

    " Are you still waiting for me? "
    This is truly sentimental question. Heaven or earth mothers will always want their son by their side,
    Mother's feeling beautifully and sentimentally is expressed in this poem.
    May your mother bless you from heaven.
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  • Magadha RaniMagadha Rani (12/10/2019 12:15:00 AM)

    A great poem sir! Mother's love is unique and unparalleled! Thanks for sharing.....10+++ (Report)Reply

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  • Poet PoetPoet Poet (12/8/2019 11:19:00 PM)

    Thank you all for the merit you give to a mom (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 30, 2015



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