Mosquito Poem by Tan Pratonix

Mosquito

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When I dissect you beneath my finger,
Pale grey mosquito, I feel you wriggle
And play dead, thinking I'll let you go; but
You are caught; and not till I remove those
Crumpled wings, those spindly legs, that ugly
Offending pinprick of a head, will I
Leave off - not till your needle is broken.

You may have kept yourself in trim - alert,
Agile, and all that; danced on my skin and
Played a hundred different tunes in my ear;
You may have swirled in delight about my
Sleepless tormented face, and tantalised
Every inch of my being - but it's all over,
My matador. Zigzagging through a broad
Beam of light, I swung you with all the force
Of my left hand, and as you curved to escape
I brought you down with my right.

..........................................................Your body,
Filled with blood [my blood] waits to be opened;
But do you think the bull, the poor clumsy
Bull, is so crude as to squash you into
A bloody mess? No, with your own sword, I
Shall kill you, and watch your blood [my blood] drain
Away. There is no sympathy, no anger;
The world is not large enough for both of us.

Tuesday, February 7, 2006
Topic(s) of this poem: descriptive
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Battle with a Mosquito
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brian Dorn 22 April 2006

Tan, awesome write... my feelings exactly! Brian

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R H 14 April 2006

A vivid and graphic account - a sense of divine retribution on the part of the narrator rang out. Regards, Justine

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Philippa Lane 08 February 2006

Nicely written. I hate mosquitos too!

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David Darbyshire 07 February 2006

Tan I hate mosquitosssssss...Bizzzzzzzzzzz but nice read good one dave

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