Broad sweep of branches, how they dip and swirl.
Contrasting trees, in unison they whirl.
Waves passing through these naked stalwart boughs,
The gale with all its wiles, fair sighs and soughs.
Turbulent sea, the air plying its trade.
Invisible source, always on parade.
Invading, rushing, over and between,
Driving itself, no one can intervene.
It’s just amazing this impressive sight,
Like motion of an ocean, air in flight.
Zephyrs moving fast, buffeting free,
An action viewed with awe, fait accompli.
© Ernestine Northover
an apt comparison, and a lovely image to nourish us during this barren section of winter. - chuck
Lovely comparison, Ernestine. The currents of creativity are certainly flowing through your pen. Danny
I could see what you were saying, and I enjoyed what I saw You're a marvel on this site Ernestine Love duncan X
The rhythm of the words moved in mind like the wind. Enjoyed the feeling of your poetry Ernestine Many thanks David
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A lovely title and an equally captivating poem. Love, Andrew x