Mountain Breeze Poem by Adrian Flett

Mountain Breeze

Rating: 4.5


You, a fresh mountain breeze,
flush away all musty web-dross
of old links, long trapped
in corners of my mind.
Leave a neonatal crispness
a serene harbinger; of us.
I knew it too, when first I saw you
but never dared to hope ‘till now.

Tuesday, November 6, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love,love and dreams
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 15 November 2018

I have been doing a lot of thinking along these lines lately. I think I need a plethora of these mountain breezes to clear out those cobwebs of mine. An important poem.10

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Adrian Flett 16 November 2018

Hi Susan, thanks for your comments and the way the poem spoke to you in that way.

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Mahtab Bangalee 24 June 2019

O mountain breeze come come make me cool the inside as well as outside I'm here beneath the rock as the mock of peace but peace yet to come please come come to make me cool

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Mahtab Bangalee 24 June 2019

Leave a neonatal crispness a serene harbinger; of us. I knew it too, when first I saw you but never dared to hope ‘till now....../// beautiful poetic expression

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Anil Kumar Panda 23 November 2018

'Leave a neonatal crispness a serene harbinger; of us.'..is very well written. Such a wonderful poem. Loved it. Thanks for sharing.

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Adrian Flett 18 November 2018

Hi Aqua thanks for reading and commenting on the poem. I'm glad it resonated with you in that way.

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Aqua Flower 17 November 2018

New love always is like a fresh start....awakening our desires and clearing out the cobwebs. A lovely write!

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