POEM 909 no not 606 but truly 909....
MOURNING
Seven mornings ago
we got a mourning letter, you know
yesterday it was the ceremony
fascinating speeches and videos, you see
everyone knew he was alive,
now he died suddenly
his wife was deeply grieving
the acquaintances and we were also very sad, everyone was shocked!
Never been sick, always present at all gatherings,
celebrations, and tournaments,
tennis, golf, skiing and much more,
Now life has been unkindest to him, I am totally upset!
his wife is intensely deepest sad,
..... rest in peace, dear Marnix
Born on March 1st - died on October 31st,2019
Regardless of age, it was Too Young To Die for him
Dear Iréne, with this simple poem our deep sorrow!
Our Deep Condolences to Iréne JV and family
from Sylvie and family
same Hometown -The Netherlands
written at 23.32 hrs Eventide Thursday 8 Nov 2019
Death of a friend gives us shocking news. This poem brings emotion and sorrow. We pray for peace for departed soul. Seven mornings ago you have received an amazing letter regarding ceremony and you have explored the idea here amazingly. In such ceremony fascinating speeches will be made with speechless voice and nothing will be hidden of course. A brilliant poem is excellently penned with much acre...10
Thank you so much foir your caring response, Master Poet Kumarmani Mahakul Sir. God's Blessings. Thank you for your precious 10.
Deepest grieving. The most shocking was, he was found dead by a passing car-instructor in his own front garden. He was blowing away the old leaves. All of a sudden a heart attack! His wife was not there, she was doing some shoppings, when she returned, the police and all the crowd was there! This was utmost shocking and saddest for her the most, but for us all. Thank you so much for reading, understanding and responding.
Deepest grieving, dear Kostas. The most shocking was, he was found dead by a passing driving instructor in his own front garden. His wife was doing some shoppings and when she returned, the police and all the crowd was there! This was utmost shocking and saddest. Thank you so much!
NONE of my comments, responses to the poets who had visited this poem, HAVE COME TO the surface now! Such a saddest feel. A terrible saddest feeling, never a straight contact since my poem site is poem site, my poem page is in ERROR. I DO HOPE POEM HUNTER DOES ANYTHING TO CORRECT THIS ERROR. DR> GEETA's TOO. THANK YOU PH and TEAM