Thursday, May 25, 2017

Musing Of An Autistic Comments

Rating: 5.0

Love knows no boundaries yet lacks conviction
Wondering why the sea is noisy yet so calm
Shore allows waves to touch and back they go
Sand watch helplessly as none applies balm.
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Tribhawan Kaul
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Rini Shibu 10 June 2017

Thanks for sharing this poem. It's our responsibility to support these children to attain their dreams and treat them as normal.they are children with high intelligence, great people who were autistic were Einstein, Newton.......Congratulations for being selected as poem of the day.

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Tribhawan Kaul 12 June 2017

Thank you dear poet for your presence on this poem of mine and your insightful comment. Thank for your good wishes too. Happy reading and writing.

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Tom Allport 10 June 2017

a wonderful poem that gives the reader some idea of what it might be like to have this health condition? ..........superbly written

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Tribhawan Kaul 12 June 2017

Loved your awaring comment dear poet. Thank you for your presence on this poem.

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Geetha Jayakumar 10 June 2017

A thought provoking write. I would like to bow the parents who accept when they know about their child. They deal with the child with lot of patience and care. Awareness should be created in society as well that these children need to be treated as normal. Beautiful write. Loved reading the poem with unique concept. Beauty flow in words.... Love knows no boundaries yet lacks conviction Wondering why the sea is noisy yet so calm Shore allows waves to touch and back they go Sand watch helplessly as none applies balm. Congratulations on member poem of the day. Thanks for sharing with us.

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Tribhawan Kaul 12 June 2017

Thank you Geetha Ji for visiting my page and your insightful comment on this poem. I appreciate your concern too towards this sort of disorder. Happy reading and writing.

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Jeannette Heywood 10 June 2017

Beautiful poem giving us a very useful insight into the autistic mind.

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Tribhawan Kaul 12 June 2017

I thank for your gracious presence on my poem and appreciating it. Happy reading and writing.

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Bharati Nayak 10 June 2017

Ah! Can't beat the blues which come free Hand me something to play and let you see Acceptance makes me accepted, energizing me Let the river flow why build dam over me? - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Oh! Come now, let you understand Reassuring touch make me stand Complexities are boon and not to abhor Open your arms and open your doors. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - A touching write about the children with autism.Thanks for spreading awareness through your wonderful poem.Congratulations for being Poet of the Day for a well deserving poem.

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Tribhawan Kaul 12 June 2017

It is so nice of you to have visited my page dear poet. I appreciate your concern through your poetic heart about autism. Thanks for good wishes. Happy reading and writing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 June 2017

Yet lacks conviction! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Tribhawan Kaul 12 June 2017

Thanks for your gracious presence on my page.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 10 June 2017

Let the river flow.... congrats on being chosen... a big 10++++++++

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Tribhawan Kaul 12 June 2017

Thanks dear poet. Your wishes and comment are appreciated. Happy reading and writing. :)

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 02 June 2017

Complexities are boon and not to abhor. Opening arms we hug the moments and opening doors we allow love to enter home. Sky is amazing and this is limit of a beautiful mind. We witness this daily that sea is noisy but very calm. Sea carries love and this sprinkles love through waves to shore and through breeze to air and visitors. Love has no boundary. This can reach to every corner. Love is eternally present within us and in nature. Only we need to perceive through beautiful mind. This is also an interesting and excellently penned memorable poem shared here. Children are ever eager to know more and more about new inventions and technology. Children carry innocence and love. They are definitely geniuses. Congratulations for creating such an affectionate poem here....10

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Tribhawan Kaul 02 June 2017

Beautiful analysis. Thanks for visiting my page on PH.

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Rajnish Manga 25 May 2017

Your effort to bring into focus the disorder of autism is highly commendable. A timely call to chane our outlook. Thanks for sharing. I quote: Complexities are boon and not to abhor Watch me cross barriers of all kind Sky is the limit for a beautiful mind.

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Tribhawan Kaul 27 May 2017

Thank you dear Rajnish for visiting my page. Yes, we have to change our perception towards this disorder.

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