My 4th Haiku- - 'waiting' Poem by Practicing Poetess

I agree with Lanz Pierre I think.

I think your comments in the notes about the poem and already well included in the text of the poem. The pronoun I is thrice repeated; twice in the first line that sets up the poem, once in the wonderful backward-looking twist of the last line. The I, of course, is self-reflexive. It reflects back not so much on the author as on each reader who brings their eye upon the text. I generally shy away from poems without any images, you've given us only abstractions here: I, you, beauty and some vague sense of time. I especially feel that haikus need that concrete imagist material to work, general. You have proven the exception. I like how you've used this short, condensed form to put the honus on the reader. On the reader's imagination and intelligence. The reader has to decide how to flesh out all the abstractions. It's intensely personal. As a haiku should be. It's quite sublime.