My 2nd Haiku- - Wandering Poem by Practicing Poetess
My 2nd Haiku- - Wandering
I wander around
On the penthouse balcony
Without looking down
Hmm, does this remind you a bit of Pretty Woman's Richard Gere, and his fear of heights? And yet he chose to stay in the penthouse.
Ah, Awesome Poem! ! ! ! ! Great Imagery! ! ! ! ! Made Me Smile! ! ! ! ! I Wouldn't Look Down Either, That High Up, I'd Rather Look Across The Sky! ! ! ! ! Remember Pretty Woman... Not Richards, Fear Of Heights though.heh. Now that older, Fear heights too! ! ! ! ! heh. Again Wonderful Haiku Poem! ! ! ! ! Thank You So Much For Sharing! ! ! ! ! Many Many 10S! ! ! ! ! +++++
Thanks Bec for reading, commenting, and rating! Still waiting for a Haiku from you! i must not have Acrophobia (fear of heights) , because my apartment is on the third floor. This is the 2nd place in my life where I've lived on the third floor. Not the penthouse, but the view is nice!
Hahaha! LOVE it! Thanks for the laugh, Barry- - I needed that! : D
Without looking down! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/7/2024 5:46:05 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Dear poet, My feelings when I read the poem is... A beautiful young girl's past life is very horrible and full of sad things. but present is very calm and joyful. the future is like a sky with joyful blinking stars.
Hmmm, That is a very interesting assessment, Saravanan. Because even though I didn't consciously intend for the poem to mean that, what you described is EXACTLY the place where my life is right now! I have gone from loss, . grief, and tragedy, to a wonderful place of blessing. It sounds like you may have the gift of interpreting dreams!