My Apex Poem by survi sharma

My Apex

Rating: 4.7

Whenever you fall down
or be frown
with your mates
and ignore their gates
never stop living
believe in giving
happiness and joy
to one who cry
and never be proud
as it spoils one's beauty
i am beautiful
not by my looks
but for my deeds
and i know one day
i will catch the apex
and then succes runs
before me., not me then
and be with what
that never apart
the life long promise
i have made
to this nature that
i will share happiness
by any means and teens
and never let me down
do you agree!

Charles Jagongo Ogola 23 June 2013

Well written. Thanks for sharing

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Don Nguyen 23 June 2013

I agree wholeheartedly! If one truly love, he will be willing to lay down his life for the person he loves. He looks to find the way to make his love a better person even some time it hurts. A sacrificial an unselfish love, true love. I wish you the best. your poem is much more touching, not full of negative feelings any more, and I am glad. Dwell on the good; dwell on the bad only if it brings out the good which is sympathy or compassion. Peace and keep up the good work.

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Indira Babbellapati 23 June 2013

Yes man, I do agree! How dare, I don't?

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Surely, happiness shared will double; while sorrow will come down. Sorrow should not be shared with unfaithful persons because they may misuse it..This poem gives a positive energy, Good

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Vishal Sharma 26 June 2013

apex is a nice word to describe one state great bio inspiring one

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Anamika Jalan 31 July 2013

yeah, a rigid determination and thus a lovely poem afterall

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Kanniappan Kanniappan 08 July 2013

Yes! yes! yes! I agree.

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Yasmin Khan 07 July 2013

Full of hope, cheery and optimistic, reaching apex through deeds...a good poem with good message

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Heather Wilkins 01 July 2013

a good write thanks for sjaring

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Jenie Franksay 26 June 2013

good verse. liked it v much

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