My Apex Poem by survi sharma
My Apex
Whenever you fall down
or be frown
with your mates
and ignore their gates
never stop living
believe in giving
happiness and joy
to one who cry
and never be proud
as it spoils one's beauty
i am beautiful
not by my looks
but for my deeds
and i know one day
i will catch the apex
and then succes runs
before me., not me then
and be with what
that never apart
the life long promise
i have made
to this nature that
i will share happiness
by any means and teens
and never let me down
do you agree!
I agree wholeheartedly! If one truly love, he will be willing to lay down his life for the person he loves. He looks to find the way to make his love a better person even some time it hurts. A sacrificial an unselfish love, true love. I wish you the best. your poem is much more touching, not full of negative feelings any more, and I am glad. Dwell on the good; dwell on the bad only if it brings out the good which is sympathy or compassion. Peace and keep up the good work.
Surely, happiness shared will double; while sorrow will come down. Sorrow should not be shared with unfaithful persons because they may misuse it..This poem gives a positive energy, Good
apex is a nice word to describe one state great bio inspiring one
Full of hope, cheery and optimistic, reaching apex through deeds...a good poem with good message
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/17/2024 5:23:02 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Well written. Thanks for sharing