When a beautiful moon was shining in Virgo
And Sun waved hands to me from Aquarius,
I was born exactly mid of noon.
Moon is my heart
where all my emotions are stored
it tends to rise up and down
like our moons delight.
Virgo, a maiden, traveling all alone
Carrying all the storms inside her thoughts.
Well sun not comfortable in Aquarius
Especially in dark Saturn house.
The sign it shows a pot holding the
Bright rays of the sun inside.
Where it shines only inside a pot
without passing away the light outside.
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© 2014 Geetha Jayakumar
Note. Don't be serious. It's just my calculation only.
It's an amazing poem, I was born on 8th of February at 8 AM, I too don't believe in Astrology and Palmistry and take it as fun only.
Ha ha ha... What a poet astrologer you are! Here is my prediction for you: With themes in the house of JUPITER and lines in the second half of MOON, you are going to be shining like the SUN ascending over you....
Geetha-ji, I am an astrologer. Not the professional kind that fleece the people. But one really interested in astrological research. I am sure, from what you have penned, you know at least the fundamentals of astrology and that is great. Your poem exudes a novelty that is not normally encountered in poesy. Great. Keep it up, please.
We may or may not believe in astrology. But this is a beautiful astrological poem of course.
star and moon........ Well sun not comfortable in Aquarius Especially in dark Saturn house. The sign it shows a pot holding the
Like a seasoned astrologer, you have handled this topic masterfully using astrological signs and terminology! Interesting write!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A great attempt to interpret the influence of the heavenly bodies on our life in a poetic form......Geetha.......amazing piece......10.