My Baby Poem by Rini Shibu

My Baby

Rating: 5.0


The heart which beats with me
which I could not hear
But my blood flows into it
And you are close to me dear
You kick me when I laugh
And scratch at my cough
As you grow my sleep you steal
This gift of love only I can feel
My little life you are safe within me
And so precious, that I am eager to see

Tuesday, August 28, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: baby,mother
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lamar Cole 28 August 2018

This is a very wonderful poem and it is also very heartfelt.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 August 2018

As you grow my sleep you steal This gift of love only I can feel My little life you are safe within me And so precious, that I am eager to see......so touching and impressive. A beautiful poem on mother and baby nicely executed.10

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Susheela Shiju- 15 October 2018

beautifully expressed!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 05 September 2018

A lovely poem Rini that speaks of Motherhood through lovely words.

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Unnikrishnan E S 30 August 2018

Part 2 That is why it said, Motherhood is the reality, fatherhood is just an opinion. The bond between mother and child is the nature’s best way of expressing herself. A lovely 100+

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Unnikrishnan E S 30 August 2018

Hi Rini, Wonderfully expressed the thoughts of an expectant mother. The child is the gift of love- the physical and soulful love between man and woman. How the mother enjoys the kicks and scratches of the child in her womb! And how she prepares her heart, soul and body to receive the child. These are all mysteries of nature... Contd

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Rebecca Navarre 29 August 2018

Ever so beautiful, so precious! .. How heartwarming, a heart beat, the gift of life! .. Brings ever so many smiles! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing this! .. Ever so many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ++++ And Blessings! ..

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