My Blue Butterfly Poem by Rini Shibu

My Blue Butterfly

Rating: 5.0

My blue butterfly has lost its way
It fluttered and flew when trees swayed
Now no more are found around my garden
My blue butterfly's heart has hardened
It realised that no more
nectar is left with me
Now my cherry blossom is pale
and has lost it's beauty
My blue butterfly has found a new garden
far away among the blue bells
It flapped the wings at me before leaving
shedding its love
Still I remember the mesmerizing sight
Of my garden
The fragrance once it has spread have been lost
and the air is dry
There is no more breeze to pass by
Everything is gone and all the fun has been lost

My Blue Butterfly
Saturday, March 3, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: butterfly,garden,love
Kostas Lagos 03 March 2018

Exceptional as always!

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Anjandev Roy 14 January 2021

Great it.

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 March 2018

Now my cherry blossom is pale! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rini Shibu 12 March 2018

thanks Edward Kofi Louis..! !

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Seamus O Brian 07 March 2018

I feel the sadness here, Rini, the poignant sense of loss and aloneness. Very powerful use of imagery to connect to emotion. Excellent writing, my friend. (and I wish you butterflies) :)

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Rini Shibu 08 March 2018

Thanks Seamus for reading and posting you remarks

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 05 March 2018

A beautifully crafted imaginative write that captures a lost love. Amazing piece..10

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Rini Shibu 08 March 2018

Thanks Rose marie for your lovely words

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Akhtar Jawad 05 March 2018

A great metaphor, a sad story of two lovers who have been lost the charms of love like a flower and a butterfly. A lovely poem.

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Rini Shibu 08 March 2018

Thanks Akhtarji for your great comment..! !

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