My Birthday Poem by David DeSantis

My Birthday

Rating: 2.9


Another day
as any other.
Yet on this day
I was born.

The Sun shone in Aquarius,
as perhaps I should be happy.
But the moon
she was a Pisces.

And the two-
we never go together.

Thursday, January 29, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: introspection
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Original Unknown Girl 03 February 2009

Happy Birthday to you David, never worry about the pisces, they are lovely but their fish always swim in opposite directions! Tricky to catch them and keep a hold. ; -) HG xx

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Onelia Avelar 03 February 2009

Happy B-day David! I like your creative astro-logical point of view to your B-day. According to the Greek mythology, Aquarius was 'cup-bearer to the Gods' often painted as a man spilling water, one who can not keep the fishes in the water :)) Funny piece of you, nice to see you writing again. Best wishes, one

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Just imagine.. another month out and you'd be a leap year baby! ! ! Belated happy happy to you... I missed you for ages... ok.. I go find your poems and put them back up now... aroha Deana xx

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Paolo Giuseppe Mazzarello 29 January 2009

You can wait and wait.

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Anita Atina 29 January 2009

Hey David, happy birthday! Do you know why birthdays should be celebrated?

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