My Delight Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

My Delight

Rating: 5.0


If the key is larger
How the lock be opened
With this pure logic
You are greater than me
As I always love
To unlock the mystery

On your tiny meanness
Off-white error yawns
Spreading dark wings
Like the house owner

You became unsought lesser
Keeping me static
Gluing visa of narrowness
On your passport

Taking tranquilizer
Should I think larger?
But my delight loves
Defeated by you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marilyn Lott 09 June 2009

This is quite lovely and meaningful. I enjoyed it very much. '10! ' Best Wishes, Marilyn

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Eyan Desir 09 June 2009

Complex with deep meaning good write

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Eyan Desir 09 June 2009

Complex with deep meaning good write

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C. P. Sharma 08 June 2009

But my delight loves Defeated by you This makes the key fit into the lock. Ecstatic poetry. CP

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Maria Barbara Korynt 07 June 2009

Beautiful poem very well 'composed'. Interesting end - 'Should I think larger? But my delight loves Defeated by you' - I like it. I am admiring the lightness of the feather and the economy of words which are saying very a lot.(10v.) Greetings. Maria Barbara Korynt

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 16 June 2009

If the key is larger How the lock be opened beautiful lines.10 shan

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Rafique Farooqi 14 June 2009

you play the words with rhyming string, touching the cordae tendenie

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Pandian Angelina 13 June 2009

Your delight is delightingly delightful Making us accept our defeat Before your play of words With a delighted smile! Angel

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Saadat Tahir 12 June 2009

replete & laden with feelings and questions deeply thought out well written cheers and ten

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 10 June 2009

Delightful read ends well indeed.

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