My Desire Poem by ramesh rai

My Desire

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Life is survived
till there is desire

I too have a desire
desire to travel across the world
to view the colors of life
to travel across the space
talk with moon and stars
to ask the nature
what made it so divine
to let the people of this world
you are a part of nature and
divinity exists in you too
to tell them
we all are travellers
to tell them
this world is an inn
we have to leave peacefully
we have to enjoy the journey
without hurting each other
as we travel in bus, train or in plane
we can not say before or after this life, and no one is confirmed about
but we must ensure
a peaceful and delightful journey
The Almighty is sending our all needs at every moment of our journey
with regards to all passengers of this journey.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lyn Paul 07 July 2013

What a beautiful journey you have set for your passengers. A great write.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 07 July 2013

Oh yes i totaly agree with how u say we r passengers n life's a journey, wow what a wondrful poem! Yes i already read dat fine shazia's poem n i tink comentd it too. Thanx 4 d phrase vandematram fellow indian uncle poet.

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Tribhawan Kaul 08 July 2013

A lovely philosophical write. Life is a journey. Completing it with happiness and dignity is in our hands.

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David Wood 08 July 2013

What a philosophical poem, we are all on the same road and we should look after each other.

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Hazel Durham 08 July 2013

We have to make our journey, one to remember, to learn and love as much as we can! Superb write and very thought provoking! !

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Heather Wilkins 25 July 2013

a good write. we are all travelers we must ensure a peaceful and happy journey.

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Heather Wilkins 25 July 2013

a good write. we are all travelers we must ensure a peaceful and happy journey.

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Somanathan Iyer 23 July 2013

We have to leave peacefully after living peacefully. Beautiful concern for harmony. enjoyed reading.

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Passionate Reader 13 July 2013

but we must ensure a peaceful and delightful journey A beautiful message! ! ! love your philosophical poems! ! !

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Shahzia Batool 13 July 2013

the analogy of the world being a temporary resting place and human beings as travellers is aptly presented! ! !

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