My Dream Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

My Dream

Rating: 4.8


Ah, my dream
I let it perched
In my mind and heart
It became a part of me
And moved me to rise.

Ah, with my dream
I feel strong
And I fear nothing
Even the rage of the wind
Even the King tides of the sea.

And I fly
To reach that star
Willing to burst
And spread
Its wonderful light.

Tuesday, December 17, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: dream
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 17 December 2019

A beautiful poem....magnificent expression with rich poetic beauty! I sincere appreciate this very commendable piece of work! Top score!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 December 2019

Typos: please read as: sincerely

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Harindhar Reddy 16 May 2020

Yes poetess Rose Marie it's true that dreams can take us to anywhere or any extreme and in either ways it's different place! Well penned appreciable thoughts expressed in the form of haiku

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Anjandev Roy 03 April 2020

And moved me to rise......beautiful. anjandev roy.

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Shaun Cronick 27 December 2019

How can anyone ever tire of a well written good poem. It's so beautiful I rated top marks again. Thank you Rose Marie.

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Rebecca Navarre 22 December 2022

May you touch all stars that you long to reach! .. Again Amazing beauty! ..+++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 22 December 2022

Definite Definite 5 Stars! .. Written with such amazing beauty and inspiration for all to feel! ..5 Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 22 December 2022

Oh how beautifully heart moving! .. Dreams that encourage us to reach for all that we dream! ..

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Soran M. H 29 July 2020

Hello Rose thanks for this masterpiece, it is amazing …….. with my dream I feel strong And I fear nothing Even the rage of the wind

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Soran M. H 29 July 2020

Dream is a rich source for inspiration, and it is directly linked to the soul, your dream always optimistic and positive, we can learn a lot from your poems, your poem so deep and well penned, Excellent, keep writing and stay blessed 10/10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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