My Dream Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

My Dream

Rating: 4.8


Ah, my dream
I let it perched
In my mind and heart
It became a part of me
And moved me to rise.

Ah, with my dream
I feel strong
And I fear nothing
Even the rage of the wind
Even the King tides of the sea.

And I fly
To reach that star
Willing to burst
And spread
Its wonderful light.

Tuesday, December 17, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: dream
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 17 December 2019

A beautiful poem....magnificent expression with rich poetic beauty! I sincere appreciate this very commendable piece of work! Top score!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 December 2019

Typos: please read as: sincerely

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Bernard F. Asuncion 18 December 2019

Simply splendid, dear ate Rose. I love it.....10++❤️

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Mahtab Bangalee 18 December 2019

o the dream comes with the light enlightens the inside world to prove the outside of you is real o the dream comes with the star to make the kingdom of wisdom in the starry wise society o the dream touches you truly by the golden ink in poetry to personify the eternity

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Akhtar Jawad 18 December 2019

Life cannot move forward without a dream, a lovely poem.

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Rebecca Navarre 22 December 2022

May you touch all stars that you long to reach! .. Again Amazing beauty! ..+++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 22 December 2022

Definite Definite 5 Stars! .. Written with such amazing beauty and inspiration for all to feel! ..5 Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 22 December 2022

Oh how beautifully heart moving! .. Dreams that encourage us to reach for all that we dream! ..

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Soran M. H 29 July 2020

Hello Rose thanks for this masterpiece, it is amazing …….. with my dream I feel strong And I fear nothing Even the rage of the wind

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Soran M. H 29 July 2020

Dream is a rich source for inspiration, and it is directly linked to the soul, your dream always optimistic and positive, we can learn a lot from your poems, your poem so deep and well penned, Excellent, keep writing and stay blessed 10/10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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