My Eternal Love Poem by Heather Burns

My Eternal Love

Rating: 3.3


The winds of
time caught
your sweet
words

Continue to
blow them in
my breeze

Etched them
on the pallet
of my heart

Oh face of
yesterday

My shadow
lingering
near

Your presence
ever hovering
making me feel
secure

Face of yesterday
my eternal love.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marvin Brato 25 January 2014

Eternal love lingers beyond time and space.....makes the heart beats always!

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Ramesh Rai 26 January 2014

Presence of love is the strongest armour that can defeat death even.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 08 February 2014

superb 10+

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 12 February 2014

The winds of time caught your sweet words very good beginning for the eternal love..

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Ken E Hall 16 February 2014

Romance with a capital Love...what could better life then with eternal love another charming write from Heather lovely...regards

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Leloudia Migdali 30 January 2016

What a wonderful tender poem! I loved it!

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Phiwe Mbatha 13 June 2014

Beautiful poem Heather, I love it.

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Lucifera Santez 25 May 2014

love is eternal but we aren't. i guess that's why we love, so that we could taste the sweet essence of time with someone we cherish. amazing poem, loved it. :)

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Tadasha Tripathy 16 April 2014

Really beautiful and amazing.

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 24 March 2014

very beautiful and romantic very good poem

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