My Father, With His Arthritic Hands Poem by Rani Turton

My Father, With His Arthritic Hands

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My father, with his arthritic hands
Closes his door, picks up the bow
Tucks the bit under his chin
Tunes it real low
My father can compete with the world's best bands
My father plays the violin.

His eyes are dim but the notes are clear
His hearing is faulty but we can hear
The songs that pour out from within
People outside stop to listen
When my father plays the violin.

He opens up another world
Farfrom stress and pain
I become a child again
As without a word
He picks up the bow, tunes it real low
My father plays the violin.

My father with his arthritic hands
Holds a magnifying glass to his eyes to read
He sits out there under the clear blue skies
Now that he can hardly walk
(Luckily my sisters are there when he needs to talk) .
And when its dusk and he enters within
Then with his arthritic hands
Father picks up his violin.


Copyright: Rani Turton

(an extract from the book of poems 'My Father With His Arthritic Hands and Other Poems' Paris,2018.

Monday, January 14, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: father,father daughter
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abha Sharma 26 April 2008

we all have loved our father but it's a beautiful way to reveal our regards and affection...a soul soothing poem...

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Irene Clark-hogg 13 April 2008

Once again your love for your father shines through your work and touches the hearts of those who read.

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Meggie Gultiano 09 April 2008

Like me, you really love your father, and they both play the violin..this is a very touching piece, it moved me to tears..i do miss my father so much..Thanks for this sharing, Rani

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Janice Windle 29 March 2008

This is a moving and beautifully written piece, Rani. The skilled hands of an old person are very touching to me too. You paint a clear picture of him.

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James B. Earley 20 March 2008

A splendid message of love indeed, passionately expressed! Thanks.

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Ranjit Ravindran 18 October 2009

Indomitable Spirit. My hearty wishes to your dad, Ma'am. Is there any way I can hear his lovely tunes?

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Catrina Heart 07 February 2009

WOW! Rani thank God you have invited me to read this poem...Its awesome...The message was great, very touching piece. With all your fathers disability the songs flow through the heart while playing his violin...10/10

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Katherine Wiley 19 June 2008

A very touching poem, beautifully written. Thanks for sharing. Kate

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Ron Flowers 09 June 2008

Rani, a truly wonderful poem of love and respect. I am glad you pointed me to it.

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Mamta Agarwal 20 May 2008

your pride in your father and compassion for him really touched me. it is very painful to see your parents suffer. but he rose above it and made you proud. so touching

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