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My Friend Of Misery (Prose)

Rating: 4.5
Drifting out of sight, fading into the night.
Times of frustration and depression.
An uncomfortably disturbing state of mind deriving from the darkness...
Thrown into a state of intense stress and desperation, how can I ease the pain in my aching heart?
Sadness resulting from being forsaken!
A solitary night, untouched, unspoken to — Loneliness!
In the pitch-dark when even your shadow abandons you!
Falling into gentle ruin, nothing here, only worms writhing round and round — writhing away while my brain leaks into the ground.
It seems that time is passing slower than normal this damn night!
Tension — The deafening sound of a clock in my head is ticking, TICK, TOCK, TICK, TOCK as if it was a time bomb; So loud, can’t make myself heard no matter how hard I scream!
An unpleasant emotion — an overwhelming feeling of discomfort, emptiness, nervousness, worry and anxiety.
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Sakalabaktula Sairaj 30 November 2017
so nice i am really impressed... it impresing only
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Prashansa Vaikunthe 10 July 2013
your thoughts are really beautiful.... superb prose
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Dis is a great emotive epic and even d pensive feelings r sketchd in a splendid way.
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feelings are nicely expressed, keep it up...
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Poetheart Morgan 02 May 2013
Hello Poetess, you are doing very good! Like the story just need more short, sometimes. But very well done!
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Wahab Abdul 01 May 2013
if you repeat words the way you repeat is a weakness of a poem, you need a point of brevity -telling something with extra implication..you have a good hand, i like your style...
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Ramesh Rai 25 April 2013
A very splendid and wonderful execution. One thing, i m not discouraging u, poetry should be as short as possible. that is why a poem of four lines can be elaborated to 400 lines. keep always it up.
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Kharon March 24 April 2013
Beautifuly depicted though it had a sad connotation to it but great non the less. Good work
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Emily Angel 22 April 2013
It's wonderful.Splendid execution.
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Kevin Halls 21 April 2013
A dark story Sameera but well written if not a bit long. But you do write this style of poetry in your unique way, and it is interesting to read. I'd like to see you do other styles of poetry as well to balance your obvious talent out. Anyway well done!
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