Sameera Alshaikh

Master Of Disguise (Prose) - Poem by Sameera Alshaikh

*'master of disguise' is not a poem, i know...
it's just something that i wrote & felt like sharing with the world :)

I'm afraid to sleep because I'm afraid to dream … I always dream of you, why do I constantly dream of you? What are you? ! … You invade my dreams, my mind, my every thought, my space, you invade my life! You hide in my shadow, you hide deep within my wounds.I catch you move! But still no one can see you! You follow me, you never leave me, I see you underneath my eyes, yet, no one does! And no one believes me! My lack of proof is your disguise. O, my eyes filled with sadness, sorrows, and grief and my heart filled with anger and charred hatred. Why do I hate you? Is it even possible to hate something that breathes my air and runs in my veins? ! You don't really exist, do you? You're nothing but a figment of my imagination! - Aren't you? … All these questions and thoughts became cages!
I close my eyes … I almost got away - almost …
I fell into a place that I've always been afraid of … I fell asleep with my phone in my hand waiting for you to text me back my dear friend. I fell into a place that I've always - always been afraid of … And I had a dream - I had the same dream again! The dream where he feels safe, secure and powerful, where he pulls off his disguise and play the game!

Comments about Master Of Disguise (Prose) by Sameera Alshaikh

  • (3/31/2013 1:18:00 PM)

    This is really an amazing work
    you use words like a painter's brush
    the words you choose really looks alive and strong so that readers come drifting in emotion
    i really love it to read again and again
    thanks for sharing
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  • Madina Morris (3/12/2013 3:42:00 PM)

    Me and you should become best friends because i just fell in love with your work. Once again Sameera, love love love ;) (Report) Reply

  • Nader Baheri (3/10/2013 11:16:00 AM)

    you have challenged the hypocrisy of a disguised person at the end.fabulous~nb (Report) Reply

  • Hazel Durham (3/9/2013 2:22:00 PM)

    You write with such ease and clarity another great write! (Report) Reply

  • Naida Nepascua Supnet (3/8/2013 6:31:00 PM)

    WOW, you are very promising.
    You make us see and feel it.
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  • (3/8/2013 10:29:00 AM)

    At the very beginning you have enunciated that this piece isn't a poem.Good! Your love life is is so emotionally brought out. and the imagery is very fine! (Report) Reply

  • Musfiq Us Shaleheen (3/7/2013 11:13:00 PM)

    very well written... oviously someone in love... very emotive but a passionate heart try to remove dark.... (Report) Reply

  • Kharon March (3/7/2013 12:26:00 PM)

    beautiful write i love the imagery in your writing and the message was well undearstood (Report) Reply

  • Stephanie Wright (3/7/2013 8:35:00 AM)

    nice job very well written. keep writting (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (3/7/2013 6:53:00 AM)

    You did well in this poem, you let all the mind tell the story with the streak of your emotion was a good write to release your mind from tracked by dark! i have to agree with Wini, in stanza your write will be easy to read but this is a good write Sameera_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Poetheart Morgan (3/6/2013 10:30:00 PM)

    I have one too, but you can describe so well my feelings that i want thank you. Well done Poet. (Report) Reply

  • Wini Jose (3/6/2013 1:06:00 PM)

    Hi this Wini Jose. Your poem does tell me that you have the callibre to be a poet. But I think you are supposed to concentrate a little more on the way you write a poem. It should have a little more of rhyme scheme and paragraph formation. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, March 6, 2013

Poem Edited: Saturday, April 13, 2013

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