Life lost its taste.
Why did I let it go to waste?
I lost everything I've held so dear.
My eyes brimming with tears;
for all the wounds that would not heal.
My heart shudders within me.
fear of loneliness sweeps over me.
I utter to myself time to time
"I'll be fine" I keep telling myself "I'm fine".
I wonder if you look down on me and smile.
I wonder if I'd ever see your shadow next to mine.
My eyes carefully scour the skies for any tell-tale signs.
I lie down, gaze at stars scattered in space.
I see you now but with clouds blurring your face.
Why can't I have you down with me?
To hold me tight - fill what's empty.
WHY DID YOU LEAVE SO SUDDENLY!
Very good poem so desirous to get filled by love as dry land lie bare to be filled with raindrops.; like a pious longing for the Divine blessing.Good poem.
LOL, Nasarudheen i couldn't agree more. ''Nothing else matters'' was a wonderful read.
I wonder if you look down on me and smile. I wonder if I'd ever see your shadow next to mine. best wishes
Hey, highly sympathetic. You did well. Do visit my poems too as time permits.
nice poem for girls...very painful to read..showing the true pains....nice
nice poem, beautiful, well written, about a girl who's so in love. keep it up
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
marvelous dear friend.especially the ending and the last part. remindes me the famous song by Metallica with the same title. muchas gracias~nb