My Heart Is Broken Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

My Heart Is Broken

Rating: 4.4


I lost everything,
That I had in my life.
Hopes disappeared
And Dreams faded away from me.
Oh, What happened to my life?
Did I never know my path?
Didn't I chooe the right one?
But, what led me to break my heart?
Who made me sad?
Who made me mad?
Still haven't I an answer in my mind.
But I know, My heart is broken now.
And this valiant man is smouldering,
With the pain he sustains.
How long can I bear this agony?
And how can I survive here?
But, at all times when my soul weep-
A question is smiling at me,
To be answered by me, me only,
By asking, is this your life?
And who saddled sadness on my heart?
May be the Sadists or snobs around me.
They made me to sob.
They rivalled to rob me.
But nothing have I now in my hand.
To continue my journey in this desert.
O, What will you do,
If you've no answer to solve your life.
Should I live and let live?
But still I'm wanting everything in life
Trying to get everything again.
But not to lose it again.
Isn't it my life, only mine!
Then how can I lose my life,
Though my heart is broken! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Harindhar Reddy 31 October 2011

Did I never know my path? Or never did I choose the right one. But, what led me to break my heart? You question posed by poet to himself taking me in trance to the poetry of Robert Frost whom I admire with blood, sweat and food. I can compare these poetic lines to the frost poem 'The Road not Taken'. Nothing-else can be said. Good message yes people break our heart which is as transparent as mirror though we live without error like in terror movie. Great Effort and so A1 is the rating given by reader in me. Hot off to the poet......

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Elena Sandu 21 October 2011

Yes of course you should live and let live good piont, but even more: mend that broken heart and open it toward not only one but everything around. Have a good cry than Stand up and let your soul fly. Write your pain write your happiness and tell us of the things you see around. Good poem, thank you for share.

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Sumanta Roy 19 October 2011

The pain in poem expressed good

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Anthony Joseph Erangey 18 October 2011

Solid and concise writing. Well expressed thoughts, and developed succinctly. Good poem. Peace.

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Benjamin Dotse 18 October 2011

this poem is really marvelous

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Misnia Bahri Awaludin 02 June 2015

lovely meaning hope you read my too. cheers

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Allemagne Roßmann 29 September 2012

quelle? belle chanson-el magnifique

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Unwritten Soul 04 August 2012

Still reading this poem after left it months ago..and still loved it, always remind me a song My heart is broken by evanescence we both know what it means right! _Soul

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Pari Dharawat 19 November 2011

Sadness kills us, but we should not be dead thinking about it....losing things you love may make you sad, but fighting for your right is your birthright. Fight with might that is your right. Good Poem, it was sad but nice

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(De Va) 15 November 2011

a beautiful write....you are your own salvation....blessings

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