My Life Poem by Indranil Bhaduri

My Life

Rating: 4.9

There she was, my life.
My living heart, my vivid soul!
Loved her, kissed her, missed her,
Each moment and every tomorrow.
My shaking fingers wiped the tears
From her dreamy eyes,
Every time they dropped,
Like pearls of sorrow,
And how I leaped in jubilation
Glancing at her rosy glow,
Full of heartfelt laughter,
Diving in intense passion,
As gaiety and romance swept me all over,
Hitting with the cupid's arrow,
And immersing myself in her flying kisses
Whispering her name in the bright sunny days,
Embracing her softly in the misty mornings,
Hugging her tight in the lovely rains!

And as I saw her,
Lying down with crimson roses all over,
Eyes closed with a hint of rift,
Causing deadly pain in my broken mind,
Could not wipe the small droplets of water
Rolling down my dry cheeks,
As my life was on her way
To begin her solitary journey
Leaving a barren heart
And a half burnt candle behind!

Copyright © 2012 Indranil Bhaduri

Segun Johnson Ozique 03 September 2012

Indranil, I'm big on free form; blank verse, end-stopped line, symbols, I like your poem. I believe it is a work in progress. Keep writing.

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Sunil Babu 04 September 2012

really romantic.i think, the words above mirrors your life in culcutta...

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Rumi Roy 06 September 2012

Awesome! Just cannot express my words of appreciation.

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Neela Nath Das 06 September 2012

Dramatic ending and superb revelation of heart-felt expression!

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Kelvin Owusu 09 September 2012

nicely structured i was hoping for a positive end by my finish but yeh lol great read

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Mabel A 08 September 2012

I was hoping so much for a happy ending. No one wants to lose there life. I like this poem.

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Allemagne Roßmann 08 September 2012

Reading this poem was a joyride..Splendid write

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Aung Si 08 September 2012

good job! good style and good idea.

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Heather Wilson 06 September 2012

Very clever poem, I much enjoyed reading it.thank you for the invite.

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