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My Life Closed Twice

Rating: 4.7

My life closed twice before its close--
It yet remains to see
If Immortality unveil
A third event to me

So huge, so hopeless to conceive
As these that twice befell.
Parting is all we know of heaven,
And all we need of hell.

Sagnik Chakraborty 15 September 2014

The ending lines are of epic proportions! Such a profound poem of sorrow and bereavement composed in such simple words. Incredible!

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Sada Bihari Sahu 11 January 2018

Wow beautifully penned. Thanks for sharing.

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* Sunprincess * 15 June 2016

.............parting is so much like the door closing on life ? an extraordinary write

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Godfrey Morris 19 February 2015

A short but cleaver poem.

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Kim Barney 19 February 2015

John and Sagnik have hit the nail on the head with their comments. When I first read the poem I wondered if she had had two near-death experiences, but it could be indeed that she is referring to the deaths of other loved ones.

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John Richter 19 February 2015

I agree Sagnik.... I would say profound is the exact word. Miss Emily's poetry has been a life-long companion for me and I have never found another poet so intricately able to describe bereavement so very well. I assume the 'life twice lost' refers to the death of her parents, though I know that several of her friends passed away early on also.

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