My Life, My Dream Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

My Life, My Dream

Rating: 4.9


Dreams define life
Its chapters read,
Its pages written,
You have been
A multiple dog folding
As the music of love,
As the lyric of mirth,
As the memories unsaved.


In spite of the bloodshed
Bleeding hearts,
Pleading minds,
Embracing bodies,
The blue flicker
Of the Candle of sweet love
Smells turmeric,
Like the first rain
Gives a touch tender
Gentle, like the first kiss!

Wednesday, May 11, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and art,love,love and life,lyrics,memory
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seema Sharma Rimi 16 May 2016

The blue flicker Of the Candle of sweet love Smells turmeric, Like the first rain Gives a touch tender Gentle, like the first kiss! Good to read.10 for its poetic excellence.

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My dream in spite of bloodshed.Nice work.

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Rajendra Rout 29 October 2018

As the music of love, As the lyric of mirth, As the memories unsaved. Lovely line shared I enjoy this poem 💯+++++

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Suratha Kumar Rout 06 October 2018

The description of life is excellent. Thanks. 10++++++

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Valsa George 13 July 2017

Love adds fragrance to everyone's life! Even in darkness what urges us to live on is the flicker of love! We feel so rich with love and feel dumped into abject poverty in the absence of it! Even the memory of a past love can ignite our spirits and give our life a sudden sparkle! A beautiful poem.... that deserves a high rating!

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Rajendra Rout 09 November 2017

it was a very beautiful poem.i agree madam.

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 September 2016

Ist pages written! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rajendra Rout 09 November 2017

what a beautiful poem.i agree with you it was lovely poem

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 May 2016

Wonderfully dreams define life like first rain touches tender. Very amazing drafting is shared on really.10

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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