My Longing For God

Rating: 4.7
I am searching for God
in the stillness of my heart.

I found out.. that was a great joy.
It cannot be expressed in words.

I pressed my hands and heart
with deep love and gratitude.

Suddenly I had the feeling
that the one who came to give me love
left me suddenly like a glow worm
which came to me in the night and left.

I sat and enjoyed this vision
in the stillness of the night.
Sunday, September 6, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: god
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COMMENTS
Freni Karaluthara 24 October 2015
it very richt in spirituality
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Paul Amrod 01 October 2015
A very meditative comtemplative poem that brings personal complancency. Very touching, Greetings Paul
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Prathibha Francis 28 September 2015
Oh! very good. I sat and enjoyed this vision in the stillness of the night.
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M Asim Nehal 25 September 2015
Sublime poem. I liked it.10
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Sanjukta Nag 25 September 2015
Beautiful use of the simile of glowwarm in the stillness of the night.... serene and peaceful piece of art. many thanks.
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Joy Beasley 25 September 2015
Very nice imagery of an awesome visitation.
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Stephani Kievaughan 25 September 2015
this one I Like. please write more. aim for Long Form.
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Liza Sudina 25 September 2015
great joy! I'm happy for the Grace you recieved from God!
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Shija Francis 22 September 2015
These word are very good. I sat and enjoyed this vision in the stillness of the night.
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Daniel Brick 18 September 2015
This poem describes a very personal encounter with God; it is really one-on-one I noticed that the actual presence of God occurs between lines 2 and 3, and this is a blank space filled with a spiritual presence, nothing material. You agree with many mystics who say the experience is beyond words, but the occasion is not beyond words and your poem makes it believable.
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