My Lord! Poem by Chandini Jaswal

My Lord!

Rating: 5.0


My hands trembled
Because my world seemed crumpled
I joined my hands and shouted,
"Your powers I have never doubted;
to elders I have never been Curt,
and feelings of others I have never hurt;
So what wrong have I done to thee? "

In the gentlest of voice said he:
"Your deeds are not normal,
and thus my love for you is not normal.
I am testing you, don't fear;
Because the start of an extra ordinary life is from here! "

My Lord!
Friday, July 13, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: inspiration,philosophical ,prayer
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
What happens when life hits the rocks? This composition describes the dialogue of man, bogged down in life, with his God.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 21 July 2018

So what wrong have I done to thee? don't fear; Because the start of an extra ordinary life is from here! .... beautiful prayer and your own answer what you hear during yur prayers... this prayer shows your innocence..........such innocense, God loves. beautiful theological, innocent prayer. thank u. tony

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Chandini Jaswal 27 July 2018

I am overwhelmed by the appreciation you've showered on my poems; thanks alot sir!

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Chandini Jaswal 27 July 2018

I am overwhelmed by the appreciation you've showered on my poems; Thanks a lot sir!

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Jazib Kamalvi 13 July 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Chandini Jaswal. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Chandini Jaswal 13 July 2018

Thank you sir! I will definitely read your composition.

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