Oh Mother! Poem by Chandini Jaswal

Oh Mother!

Rating: 5.0


A mother, She is hard to describe,
Cause whatever she does is not bribed.
You can observe her care,
When she cooks your food with her hands bare.
She wants it all best;
From your rest to your test,
From your chest to your vest.
Oh mother! Forgive me for all my sins,
Forgive me! For littering the bins.
Oh mother, You are very bold,
And you are worth your weight in gold.

Oh Mother!
Friday, July 12, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: affection,love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I dedicate this poem to my mother; who is my guide, philosopher, cook, driver, washerwoman, tutor, friend and even my biggest critic.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 22 November 2019

Well articulated and nicely brought forth from the heart. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing, Chandini.

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Chandini Jaswal 22 November 2019

Thank you sir. Your words of appreciation have motivated me to write more.

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Solomon Senxer 21 November 2019

" Cause whatever she does is not bribed." " She wants it all best" Two among many lines I love... Thank you for describing mother accurately...!

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Chandini Jaswal 22 November 2019

Many thanks for the kind words sir.

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Vaidyanathan Ram Iyer Channel 13 September 2019

The poem with ryhming, dedication towards the mother, Confessing the sin, well written poet, thank you poet.

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Chandini Jaswal 15 September 2019

Many a thanks for your kind words sir! Delighted to know that you liked the poem.

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A lovely poem dedicated to your Mother. I like the way you have described her as your guide, philosopher, cook, washerwoman and a critic too.There is no one in this world who can equal the love of a mother. A mother's love is the purest and the most unconditional love. Thank you Chandini. Be blessed.10++

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Chandini Jaswal 27 July 2018

There is no one in this world who can equal the love of a mother. A mother's love is the purest and the most unconditional love. Couldn't have said it better. Thank you ma'am for the kind words

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Anna Osipova 10 April 2017

Great poem! I can see your love to your mother in every word. You have a great mother and she has a great daughter!

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Chandini Jaswal 07 July 2017

Thank you Anna!

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